FIC: The Hiatus ~ Chapter 3

Oct 27, 2012 15:47

Title: Hiatus ~ Chapter Three
Author: bugs
Rating: T
Word Count: 3,400
Pairing: Sharon/OC, Sharon/Flynn UST, Sharon, Rusty
Spoilers: Through season 1 of Major Crimes
Summary: Sharon must deal with her past as her everyday responsibilities call for her attention.
A/N: Got a million other things to write, but lacklusterfic is headed out of town and sort of whined ( Read more... )

t, major crimes, suspense, sharon raydor, drama

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bugsfic October 28 2012, 06:13:30 UTC
Sort of whined. In the nicest way possible. :D

I guess the score's just about even right now, though, since Nick did manage to steer the conversation away from divorce.

I had Sharon doing more of a d'oh! moment when she realizes this, but liked it that she's sort of oblivious to his insidious ways.

I'm very curious to learn about what went wrong with their son! How does the disgruntled child of a cop and a lawyer rebel, anyway? Is he in a commune somewhere? Beach bum? Saving the whales? Or something a little more unsavory?

And you just keep guessing at the plot!

This was a lovely little moment. I like the way Nick's presence is giving Rusty a chance to test the boundaries a little. (And for Sharon to prove herself willing to listen, while still remaining the Adult In Charge.)

I was going for just that. Hard to balance that, because I don't want Rusty to feel abandoned, but I don't want Sharon to be some big pushover, jumping at his beck (hee) and call. But everything's still so tenuous between them, and I definitely think Rusty would have issues with men coming between him and his 'mother'. This should be interesting!

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