FIC: Turn the Page ~ Chapter Twenty-five
Title: Turn the Page ~ Chapter Twenty-five
Author: bugs
Genre: AU, Romance, Drama
Rating: T
Word Count: 3,800
A/N: For those overfed and bored before the flat screen souls, a little Christmas present. Love yah! *awkward sideways hug*
( She was my lady of the mist. Her hair held droplets of water, like trickles of life blood running around her face. The fog swirled in her pale eyes, hiding her soul from me. )
Author: bugs
Genre: AU, Romance, Drama
Rating: T
Word Count: 3,800
A/N: For those overfed and bored before the flat screen souls, a little Christmas present. Love yah! *awkward sideways hug*
( She was my lady of the mist. Her hair held droplets of water, like trickles of life blood running around her face. The fog swirled in her pale eyes, hiding her soul from me. )
guess who was about to PM you whining about no #nunfic for christmas? =D
*squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee* XD
i love the architecture of this chapter XD all the flashbacks and how you placed them =P hee! but the important point is: THEY'RE ON A HONEYMOON WEEKEND!!!! and laura is adorably jealous! XD cute!! ♥♥♥
"Oh dear," Laura said faintly as she pushed back her coffee cup. "I can't...Even breathe."
GPOY of me today
"That you are my wife and keep the purse strings," he said, rendering her speechless.
(*O*) *iz dead* --->
i can't wait for next chapter!!!! =D OMGs!!! XD
thank you bugs!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ *awkwardly sidehugs you back*
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I'm glad the flashback technique worked. That can get confusing, but I like to move things forward while filling in details from the past. Otherwise, we're going to be here for 100 chapters! (Yeah, I know, I know...)
I just adore that Bill's already writing little fanfics in his head. "And the waiter thinks we're married and you have me whipped..."
You're always looking forward to the next chapter! Crazy girl!
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