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FIC: The Stars in Their Courses - Chapter Ten

Nov 07, 2009 12:28

Summary: Elizabeth’s new haven presents its own dangers; Laura must find her leadership skills.
Rating: T
Genre: A/U, Adventure, Drama, Romance, Angst
Word Count: 2,300
A/N: I’ve seen The Plan, and had the unpleasant discovery that my plans (*Cavil voice* I have a plllaaaannn!) for the Cylons in this story mirrored the show's writers. As for spoilers ( Read more... )

au, romance, t, series, a/r fic, angst, drama, adventure

Comments 17

seirina November 7 2009, 23:26:40 UTC

Great chapter! I'm glad at least that Elizabeth is off the Olympic Carrier... not a moment too soon... but I'm still hoping for a family reunion at some point soon. Maybe? :)

bugsfic November 8 2009, 06:03:55 UTC

I'm glad at least that Elizabeth is off the Olympic Carrier...

Yes, readers got what they want! Only, not really. :-\

Reunion coming!

whatever_lj November 8 2009, 01:11:03 UTC

Oh, Bugs, coming through for me on this sad-ass Saturday night -- you make things much more entertaining!

bugsfic November 8 2009, 06:08:00 UTC

I'm trying to pick up the pace here! I want to tell the story, you want to read, seems like a good deal!

bsg_aussiegirl November 8 2009, 01:27:35 UTC

I love the line about Laura looking at Baltar like he was homeless asking for change.

bugsfic November 8 2009, 06:10:57 UTC

I don't understand why neither Bill or Laura could notice that flashing red sign on Baltar's forehead: I'M GUILTY OF SOMETHING. PROBABLY JUST WHAT YOU THINK.

It drove me crazy that it took them years to finally get it out of him!

Oh, wait, I'm writing an AU; I can do whatever I want! Whoo-hoo!

You're doomed, Baltar.

kastari November 8 2009, 03:19:24 UTC

A small man with dark, dead eyes and a mean hare’s pointed mouth, stood waiting, hands clasped at his waist.

Oh, how I LOVE Brother Cavil.

And you've got Baltar down pat. Nervous & jittery with darting eyes--most definitely.

I WANT ELIZABETH ON GALACTICA!!!

bugsfic November 8 2009, 06:17:40 UTC

Somehow, Brother Cavil swooped in and stole the Cylon mantle. He's just so watchable and in this case, writeable. (Is that a word?)

Baltar must die...oops, did I type that outloud?

I WANT HER ON GALACTICA TOO! But you'll just have to wait.

mascaret November 8 2009, 13:30:03 UTC

Loving this series.

Glad to see that Elizabeth inherited the wits of both her parents. Looks like she's going to need it.

bugsfic November 9 2009, 04:10:25 UTC

HEH! I know, I'm an evil writer. So close...and yet so far for poor Elizabeth.