FIC: With Full Honors (3/3)

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These occasions had become rote for her, and she didn’t like that. Sometimes she even had to write the names down on a card to make sure that she didn't make a mistake. The last service a few days ago had been a hurried affair, with no bodies recovered, no family to take the folded flag--it had felt empty, as empty as the caskets.

“Ready, Tory

Comments

[bsg_aussiegirl]

As usual, very good.

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It's always great to hear that the stories are still holding a reader. :D

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Ohhh, he's hedging, and of course Laura rejects the olive branch.

A woman has her pride! (For about ten minutes.)

Take your time, it's not like you have to hurry.(insert eyeroll here)

Oh gods, I know. I've got a line for Bill written down, pretty much to that effect, but I can't see him saying something that snarky to his lady. Too damn bad, maybe it would have shaken her up.

That speech was wonderful by the way. I always have trouble hearing Laura's voice and you seem to have it down.

That's really good to hear. It was a bit nerve-wracking to write, since I didn't have MM to read the lines for me and make it work.

Your point about Cain is why I simply love that arc of episodes. They've gotten back together after that whole martial law thing and yet it had to feel tenuous. Encountering her had to show them how much they needed it other. I don't think they ever looked back from there.

[louiseell]

Enjoying this series! Nice interactions between them, things said and not said, feelings hurt, and both of them oh so human...looking forward to more!

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I like to hear that I've got things not said. It's really hard to not have the characters say everything they need to say sometimes. :-\

[tcmcqueen]

I have read all your stories, and they are absolutely fantastic.
Sometimes I do not review because I lack the words to do it.
But please keep your writting coming, I would be here to read them all.
Thanks

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It's always great to hear from someone new! It's perfectly fine to just say I like your stuff. I'm easy; that's all the encouragement I need!

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This story especially captures them, I think, in that time period where they're struggling to make a choice about their relationship.

It's so hard not to grab them, like we used to do with Barbie and Ken, and just moosh them together, making kissy noises!

It's probably for the best that I'm trying to follow canon, or I'd be grinding out fluff and smut at a frightening rate!

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See, I'd be totally into this if they actually made the dolls in proper proportion to the actors. Because it really helps on the smut writing to have something to try out positions on. ;)