FIC: My Hero (4/4)

[bugsfic]

Rating: MA
Genre: Romance, Smut, Humor, Angst
Word Count: 1,900
Summary: Roslin gives Adama his award early.
Setting: Post-Hero
Series: Love in a Time of War: 8

Chapter Four:

Laura had knocked on the hatch with no answer, but she knew Tigh was in there.  She pushed the door open.  The Colonel sat at the table, facing the opening as though expecting her.

Comments

[lynchgrrrl88]

Fantastic ending to an awesome series!
my favourite line of this chapter “Yeah, she coulda gone for that Zarek frakker--“
good times, good times!
thanks man :D

[bugsfic]

my favourite line of this chapter “Yeah, she coulda gone for that Zarek frakker--“

OMG, that's so funny! I literally added it right before I posted. I'm watching my 4.5 DVDs, like everyone else, and Zarek's being a particuarly bad boy, and I thought, I can't forget him! Jealous!Bill is a fun creature!

You're welcome!

[lynchgrrrl88]

yes, Zarek is shooting people up all round, no mercy.
i actually met richard hatch at a convention last month and he was pretty touchy feely... zarek is really a bad boy :P haha, good times! cry that this series is over!

[bugsfic]

I'm shocked, shocked to hear that Hatch would be touchy-feely! He still has his hair in that late 70's feather; he's gonna still have his groove on!

[kastari]

Such a large section

[bugsfic]

I actually wrote it as a stand-alone story, just the dialogue, no scene to it, to show how men talk--yup, sure, yup--but I couldn't get anything after Laura showed up, so it just sat on my hard drive, until I thought it would work here, and Laura had something to say!

But Laura had watch what she wishes for. Now Saul and Bill have talked--how's that going to work out for her!?

[bugsfic]

Uh oh, Bill looks worried in your icon!

OMG where do you get these lines?

I just love writing dialogue. And Saul makes my skin crawl, but he's a great character to think through on the page.

Strangle them? Let's knock their heads together like coconuts instead; they're hard enough.

[whatever_lj]

Terrific stuff, Bug -- deft and believable dialogue. I just love this series. THANKS.

[bugsfic]

This was a really fun chapter to write--it feels like I'm moving us along. Great to hear it's working for you.

[bugsfic]

Saul is....well, I'm not a fan either. But I think Michael Hogan is fabulous with the role, I just...no. Just no.

And the bromance is fabulous, even though I can't see a single reason for Adama to respect him...anyway! It a lot of fun to write the bromance!