FIC: Date Night (1/3)

[bugsfic]

Rating: MA
Word Count: 2,225
Summary: Is it a first date if you’ve already been frakking for a year?
Genre: PWP, Smut, Romance, Humor, Fluff
Series: Love in a Time of War: 7

A/N: I need a break from the angst this series was doling out, and I’m assuming readers do as well, so let’s have some fluff, frolicking and frakking!

Chapter One:

Comments

[kastari]

First, yes?

HA!

I really liked this piece.

Having Laura say this line:

“Maybe we’re just not easy people, Bill.”

was fabulous! It's got to be a very special line for me to pull it out of an entire fic. This one is.

Loved how you described all of the missed dates & plans gone wrong.

And this:

“I want to take us back to Caprica,” he said,...

WOW. Really WOW.

Thanks for writing this little bit of sweetness.

[bugsfic]

“Maybe we’re just not easy people, Bill.”

I liked giving that line to Laura, who's the one trying to create this fantasy world that they retreat into; it's always fun to make characters see their own insanity. ;)

“I want to take us back to Caprica,” he said,...

Yeah, well, I'm not sure if this is going to work, but we'll see....can't change it now! LOL!

[lis_pendens]

It is nice to get some time to just enjoy themselves - this interlude is quite fun!

[bugsfic]

Yes, I needed an interlude too! Enjoy the fun!

[miri_d]

Excepting Bill's torpedo, of course, amirite?

[bugsfic]

HEH!

Make that a motorcycle....those pipes....

[whatever_lj]

I was so happy to get to see Laura get her chocolates and orchid -- she deserves them.

THANKS, as always!

[bugsfic]

She's got more control than me. I would have eaten the chocolates right off! The thought of an existence without chocolate....*sob*

Oh well, she has a something to distract her. I'll give her a pass this time.

And you're welcome!

[bugsfic]

Not a *whole* night, but at least a couple of hours to having some smutting!

Read on!