Farewell the Plumed Troop 1/1

Dec 03, 2009 22:49

Title: Farewell the Plumed Troop 1/1
Author: buffyaddict13
Fandom: Band of Brothers
Rating: PG-13 for a smattering swears
Words: ~1,000
Characters/Pairing: Gen, Skip Muck, Don Hoobler, a glimpse of a few others
Disclaimer: I wrote this based on the character Skip Muck in the HBO miniseries Band of Brothers, not the real man or information from the books Band ( Read more... )

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entwinedangels December 4 2009, 14:52:36 UTC
T_T
man you have skips voice down so well.
i want to comment more and write long words that fully express how sweet (bittersweet i guess?) this fic is, but my brain is broke along with my heart
*smushes malark*

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buffyaddict_fic December 5 2009, 03:07:40 UTC
oh, i love your lip&luz icon. *smoosh*

thank you sweetie. i love skip so freaking much.

*sends bandaids for your brain and heart*

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tabaqui December 4 2009, 17:34:35 UTC
You know, without opening your mouth that Malark won’t hear you, can’t hear you, never will again. That knowledge hurts more than dying.

Oh, man. Now you've made me cry. Damnit.
*sniffles*

These are really just lovely but man, they hurt. They just hurt.

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buffyaddict_fic December 5 2009, 03:08:29 UTC
*hug*

thank you sweetie. ♥

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kymellin December 4 2009, 19:48:54 UTC
You write so beautifully. I totally didn't see where this was leading, then the curtain. I held on until Luz jumps into the foxhole, and now I can't stop crying. It's going to hurt when I get this far in the tv series.

Amazing fic! Really! These are tears that ought to be shed. ♥

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buffyaddict_fic December 5 2009, 19:13:23 UTC
*hugs you muchly*

thank you sweetie. <3

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skew_whiff December 5 2009, 23:48:17 UTC
Oh god, way to break my heart, dammit. (Should've guessed from the characters. Skip always gets me just *there* - I think it's age and his personality, he feels like somebody I could've known, and there's this huge sense of lost opportunity.)

It's a subject that's been touched on a lot, and the series says it best with what little there is, but I really like the originality of the spin you put on it - I can see the influence of Et Maneat Semper, but the description of the 'tent', the final twist of where the perspective came from, made it something individual.

Also, the line 'Penk has an unnatural attachment to my shoulder. Lotsa guys do.' is just pure win.

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buffyaddict13 December 6 2009, 20:29:32 UTC


*duct tapes your heart*

i love skip. i get so frustrated/upset by his death, the futility of it. i know there are many great men who lost their lives in easy (and all companies) but skip holds a special place in my heart.

but I really like the originality of the spin you put on it - I can see the influence of Et Maneat Semper, but the description of the 'tent', the final twist of where the perspective came from, made it something individual.

*beams*

thank you! coming this late to the bob party, i know pretty much every fic has already been written. i'm really happy to know this was a little unique.

Also, the line 'Penk has an unnatural attachment to my shoulder. Lotsa guys do.' is just pure win.

:D hee! well you know, skip's shoulder is AWFULLY comfy.

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foofighter0234 January 13 2010, 19:26:37 UTC
My heart you have broken it. ;_;

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