Comments | buffy_genfic: [Fic] Lunch Break [1/1, Oz, Gen, R] for punch

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[Fic] Lunch Break [1/1, Oz, Gen, R] for punch_kicker15

Oct 29, 2016 08:22

Title: Lunch Break
Characters: Oz, Cordelia
Rating: R
Word count: 978
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Comments 4

snogged October 29 2016, 22:50:12 UTC

Aww! I love seeing Oz and Cordy be each other's secret keepers.
Nice job with this friendship development. It really works.

sunalso October 29 2016, 23:23:25 UTC

Thank you! I'm very glad it worked for you and I appreciate the read and review!

punch_kicker15 October 31 2016, 02:26:12 UTC

Oh, yay, you did the Oz prompt! I particularly liked Oz's suspicions about demonic activities in the cafeteria, and Cordelia's developing awareness that she's not the center of the universe. Thanks so much for this!

sunalso October 31 2016, 17:22:38 UTC

Thank you! Oz and his plight was often kind of "forgotten" by the show. I think he must of had a terrible time with it and this is my bit of headcanon as to how a Cali guy in the late '90s would have coped with it, and I just love Cordy and it was nice to give her a chance to be vulnerable for a moment (before she puts her armor back on).

It's always nerve wracking posting on a new site (especially since a lot of the stories here seem narrative and not dialog driven and I tend to do the opposite), and I appreciate your kind words, so thank you again.