Poetic Calisthenics

[buddycub1]

I haven't done this in a while..but I need a creative outlet....and thought i would share the wealth:

5 Words

Write a poem using theses 5 words

• Begin
• lift 
• Inner 
• lost 
• soda

Comments

[buddycub1]

I look before I leap
But I still fall
I lift myself up, but
My inner self is troubled
Like shaken soda bubbles
And I can’t settle them in
If I want the future to begin
I must let my fears get lost

[ex_denied362]

Begin your beginning with haste
lift thine eyes to the natural divine
reaching into your inner sublime
do not be lost in your life journey
grab your soda and live 'til glory.
...
Craptastic, eh?

[buddycub1]

I am scared of you and you cool poetic skillz...that was good thanks for sharing:)

[ex_denied362]

Thanks, you are way too kind!!

[byftpup]

With a lift,
I felt it begin.
With my inner soul,
that yearning for the lost
soda, I burped!

[buddycub1]

I Love it...and you on so many levels:)

[byftpup]

was just trying to work a smile on to your face... *G*

You've been so down..

Then I read yours and the other persons and felt terribly shallow.. ~sigh~ Oh well.. I'm also fickle so I'm over feeling shallow now..

*HUGS* I hope it made you smile
byftpup

[buddycub1]

well thought it was wonderful....and so are you(shallow or not)