MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: MARCH 2012
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To be honest I have to say I am really happy to see a more shameless and dickish Woohyun come around every so often! Especially in the group blasts, twitter and comments. He seems to be more like I see him behind the heart's and smile's facade and I really, really enjoy when he's being a douche (..... what).
I would like to see it more with Sunggyu though! I think the both of them are still very... complacent and nice when it comes to each other. Which makes sense to be honest but I do think there would be times Woohyun would be more abrasive or a bit more selfish. Basically I'm waiting for the day they both get a little annoyed that they're around each other constantly and kind of snap. I don't think either of them are exactly the type to tread carefully around each other when they get into those moods and can allow themselves to go all out before settling back to their healthy relationship?
I have to congratulate you on playing the more heart felt and kind aspect of Woohyun. It's not just the fanservice-y kind of niceness he has to him but I can see the genuine care he has for those around him and it's heart warming. He shows it in his own way and tries to make everyone feel included, is social, good natured and generally a really nice guy. I like skimming over interactions between him and other people because I get a sense of his quick wit/slight snarkiness at times but also just how much of a good guy he is as a whole?
I really, really get pumped up all the time to write with you and just explore their dynamic! I really can't wait for it to go into deeper places for the both of them (as they are both slightly insecure perfectionists with overworking tendencies) and also sillier places (because they are dorks). I hope this was helpful! I probably missed something out but that's generally it ;v;
ps. please allow me to sleep on his cheeks forever (◍˘ᴗ˘◍)
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Yeah, I've been trying to take into account what you said in the last crit about making him more boyish, more teasing, and... dickish. XD He definitely needs to learn how to be like that around Sunggyu, though, I agree. He tends to let his affections overpower, because they're such good friends and y'know. LOL. He'll become even more annoying, selfish, and abrasive soon enough. 8D/ But yeah, I'm seriously waiting for that too. I don't think it's too far away with how things are going. It's going to take a while, still, but they'll get there.
That was a part I was really concerned about bringing out. I didn't want to play on the fact that he does throw his heart out a lot at people and lets it be superficial and that's that. I definitely feel like he cares immensely about the people around him, those who are closest to him and he feels like he wants to give them the best he can. So I'm glad that that's shining through! ♥
Likewise. ♥ Like I said, you're one of my favorite writing partners. :3 We'll be able to go deeper and explore more fun places the more we play them for sure.
Always. (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)
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