MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: JAN-FEB 2013

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[oppa]

No need to apologize! I completely understand all of that, but Taec will be around if Khun ever wants to chat, same for me if you do! :) It really feels great to hear that you see these developments with him, I'm relieved! As far as the history..that will come along in time and they will learn more about each other haha.

I often am a little paranoid about my writing since I have a few bad habits that I don't even seem to notice, so I'm happy to hear that you think he's portrayed well. I do my best with that, so it's good to hear it pays off. As for..the thought flow? Funny story about that as someone else had just pointed something really similar out recently. I actually was doing that without realizing it! haha. Since Taec had a lot of things he went through and started acting more introverted I guess my writing ended up reflecting that. Not to mention he really..might not have much going on up there hehe, totally kidding he's a smart guy. (even though I really wonder some times...) Anyway I'm making some changes and working on showing more of his internal thoughts so please let me know if you notice any changes next time we scene!

...he's just so charming, really =/)=;