My Immortal; hide/Hyde; PG; yaoi

[bubblegumtotchi]

Title: My Immortal
Author: catsmeow2003
Chapter: One-shot
Word Count: 692 *PHAILS*
Prompt: This fic, by art_noveau; your presence still lingers here, And it won't leave me alone (My Immortal, by Evanescence)
Rating: PG? For implied malexmale?
Pairing: hide x Hyde
Warnings: Character death
Genre: angst, RP-based, AU
Synopsis: Memories, even good ones, can be hard to deal

Comments

[kagome_angel]

I don't know why you said I should ignore this! *wipes at tears* I read Papaya's and it made me cry and this one made me cry to and alskdjfpawoeitjpwoituj0w3896uopijp46y it's too early for this. JUST WAIT TIL I POST THE NEXT AXEL/ROXAS FIC. AND THEN I'LL GET YOU BACK! *shakes fist* XD

No, seriously. Did you doubt the beauty of this? *sniffs* It's heartbreaking too, and damnit, I still wish I could come up with similies and metaphors like you do.

I'm going to try my best to pick out my favorite quotes and not quote the whole thing back at you. *LOL*

and I consider moving. And then I’ll catch just a hint, barely there anymore, of your scent, in your pillow, on the couch, and I could never leave.

;___________________________; HYDE. *CUDDLES HIM*

Only now that you’re gone do I realize how very much simply letting you do those things for me helped you in return.

That line actually hit very close to home for me, so... yeah. *more tears*

People say that when the one you love dies, they take a piece of you with them. I disagree with that. You didn’t take a piece of me with you. You took all of me.

Best line(s), in my opinion. I have to agree with duntuchdakei.

It’s the times that I forget. Those are the times that it’s the hardest.

Also hits really really close to home. Reminds me of the fic I wrote shortly after Kyle was killed.

I NEEDS TO READ HAPPY FIC NAO.

*cuddles you lots* Seriously, though. You put a lot of emotion into so few words, and you deserve applause for that! *applauds* ^_^ <33333333333333

[bubblegumtotchi]

*snugglepets and wipes tears* Well, you know me. I'm never gonna be happy with anything I write. LOL Plus, I rarely write angst at all, so this was a BIG deviation for me, and yeah, I was extremely nervous about it. And I'm sure you'll more than get me back for it. xP

Now THAT I can't argue. The similes and metaphors have always come easily to me. I was such a nerd about it in HS that I even took extra English and media and writing courses AS ELECTIVES. XD;;

Hyde just... yeah, he's very much the sort that would feel tied to the past. He's suffered a LOT in that house, but it's where all his happy memories are, too. I could so see him being torn between leaving to escape the bad, and staying to relive the good.

And yeah. Miha and I talked about that, too. A lot of times, we feel selfish and needy, and don't see that there are people around us that simply need to feel needed as much as we need them.

*blush* Thank you. I actually rather liked that one, too. Partly because it's so very true. And also because, in a very real sense, hide WAS Hyde's life, his reason for returning to the land of the living, as it were, from the just-going-through-the-motions state he was in for three years after his parents were killed.

That, ironically, was the easiest (and yet hardest) part to write. It was something they touched on in an episode of Fresh Prince of Bel Air forever ago, and it's always stuck with me.Because it's so very true. Hell, my grandfather died 17 years ago, and I STILL do that. Something will happen, and I think about how he would like it or whatever... and then remember that he's gone.

*blushes and bows and snuggles* Thank you, darling. I'm glad the emotion came through. That was the main thing I wanted to convey. (and okay, I'll admit, part of the reason it ended up so short is because I was crying too hard to see to type anymore LOL)