He Keeps Waiting (AJ/Brian, PG, for 1sentence)

[bubbleforest]

For 1sentence. This was SO MUCH HARDER than I thought it was gonna be. General abuse of all grammar rules lie ahead. Many thanks to applecede and trumpeterofdoom for the encouragement. ♥

He Keeps Waiting
AJ/Brian | PG | Theme Set: Gamma | 50 sentences

Comments

[epicflailer]

OMGSQUEE! dude, i'm jumping all around the page here, going up and then coming back to this comment box every time i find a sentence that i reallyreallyreally like so i can add it to the huge list at the bottom. i'm getting pretty damn dizzy.

you already know i worship you, but let me reiterate. I. WORSHIP. YOU. this is so perfect, from the characterization, to the little moments you picked, to the dialogue, to the interaction between the boys. i have so much respect and love.

box was awesome, so very, very perfect; i can see brian and aj in my head and that is exactly what they'd say and ohhhh. *quibbles* run. run broke me. brian's always the strong one, whatever they may say about kevin. and then in wings aj gets to be the comforter, andandand--god, how do you do this in ONE sentence?!

also, silk! *meep* i felt tingles, yo. and mask is just spot on, about misunderstandings and how there's always two sides to a story. and hee! sacred makes me grin because that's what all their fan!memorabilia should be about. and then gravity! about aj being all dark and pulling brian under and it's one sentence, one, but you can feel the desperation and the shit, it's happening and you just get so, damn, scared. and then you END IT AND AJ STILL HASN'T SAID I LOVE YOU.

*pauses for breath* i have not been this incoherent since your fic in fic_requests, honest to god. *hugs the fic and twirls you*

[bubbleforest]

Oh my God. Nat, seriously, how much do I LOVE YOU right now? This is like, the most awesome of all feedbacks! These are just SENTENCES, man, and you STILL manage to make your feedback long! Made my day, I tell ya.

You are so, so nice, and I am not worthy of all this praise! Hee, thank you! I just want to jump around and make squeaky noises of joy at you. I'm so, so glad you liked so many of them. Box and Silk, yo, I worked so HARD on those to make them sound right, and the fact that you felt tingles on Silk fills me with absolute glee. And, like, all your other awesome comments on the other sentences! Big huge THANK YOU! I don't care HOW dorky I sound right now, you fill me with dorky glee! *twirls around with you* ♥ ♥

[epicflailer]

dorky! glee!

hee! *cuddles the fic* you are teh AWESOME, you know? and if i give long feedback it's only because the fic merits it and the writer merits it and BOY do you ever. you know that i'm absolutely in love with your writing!