He Keeps Waiting (AJ/Brian, PG, for 1sentence)

Mar 23, 2006 23:56

For 1sentence. This was SO MUCH HARDER than I thought it was gonna be. General abuse of all grammar rules lie ahead. Many thanks to applecede and trumpeterofdoom for the encouragement. ♥

He Keeps Waiting
AJ/Brian | PG | Theme Set: Gamma | 50 sentences

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fic: !index, challenges: 1sentence, fic: aj/brian

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queenofgrey March 23 2006, 23:29:57 UTC
you have officially killed me & reaffirmed why you're the best, all at once. i wish i could pick a favorite, but that's just not going to happen. excellent job.

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bubbleforest March 23 2006, 23:39:28 UTC
Aww, thank you so much. That is so nice. ♥

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trumpeterofdoom March 23 2006, 23:44:22 UTC
You already know how much I love these. Just. Dude. I'm all asquee here!

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bubbleforest March 23 2006, 23:45:47 UTC
Hee! Means a lot from a non-AJ/Brian lover such as yourself. ;)

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nothingscripted March 24 2006, 00:27:52 UTC
METTEKINS! why must you kill me with these snips?!

i mean, seriously, you go from "AJ yelped when something hit him right between the eyes; when he looked down, a red Skittle had fallen into his lap, and when he looked back up Brian was laughing so hard he was gasping for air." TO "To hell with Jack Daniels," Brian hissed, pinning AJ's wrists above his head and murmuring the same words again into AJ's mouth." and i'm supposed to be still functioning properly?!

*takes a deep breath and continues* just, god, i haven't read a lot of bsb fic (i got sucked into the supernatural whirlwind, i cannot help it! those damn texans) and well THIS, this just gets to me. i love it all woman, i love it ALL! please continue to amuse and break me with your angsty arok. kthnxbye!

oh, and i must add that it doesn't help that i listened to 'rush over me' and 'love is' while reading these. gah.

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bubbleforest March 25 2006, 02:08:47 UTC
AMYKINS! Eeep, you are the bestest! I am, like, grinning from ear to ear right now (and also want to pet you, because you shouldn't be feeling angsty! Not over this! ♥)

Thank you SO MUCH. This was a really tough project, and I'm so glad you thought I pulled it off. (Also, heh, everyone seems to have been sucked in by the Supernatural boys, so you are not alone :P) Again, thank you thank you thank you! *smooches*

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findmeakor March 24 2006, 01:25:29 UTC
I was so anticipating these earlier today; weird. My favorites are Forgotten, Forever and Eclipse. I love how they're a timeline as well; lovely as always, Mette.

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bubbleforest March 24 2006, 09:59:06 UTC
Heh, great timing then. :) And thank you! I worked my ass off to make those sentences a timeline, lemme tell you. I'm glad you liked it. :)

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moore_oaks March 24 2006, 01:43:46 UTC
Your writing is just so ... mature, the diction precise, and as a reader I can feel their emotions through that one sentence, which is amazing. Awesome job.

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bubbleforest March 24 2006, 10:00:17 UTC
Thank you so, so much. Really, you have no idea how much that means to me.

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