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I'm going to dedicated tomorrow to as much writing as possible.

Dec 07, 2007 21:26

I did get a little bit of writing done this month, but I have yet to get a chapter uploaded at FanFiction.Net this month. This Monday is icepiegon23's birthday, so I want to get the story up about where Griff takes advantage of both Melody and Jamie. The biggest challenge will writing the story to make it not too graphic - but I'm afraid I'll have to increase ( Read more... )

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Okay, here you go... bttf4444 December 8 2007, 16:02:10 UTC

I forgot about the Canatas, but I'll have to add that in right away.

December 24, 2046
12:00 PM PST

Stephanie Tannen was feeling nervous about spending Christmas with her extended family. After all, there were quite many on her father's side of the family were really known for being bullies. She quite never got along too well with her cousins, Ziff and Belle. Actually, they were her second cousins - but they all grew up in Hill Valley.

She then thought about her mother's side of the family. At least, her family would be able to spend all of tomorrow with them. She certainly identified much more with that side, and she was quite proud of her scientist great-grandfather, Dr. Emmett Brown. After all, he had certainly done a lot to really further the technology of this world.

She and her brother, Will, were packing up some items they wanted to bring over to Grandpa Miff's and Grandma Anne's house. She sure was fond of her grandparents, and she certainly did have plenty of fond childhood memories that involved them.

However, she really hated the fact that she'd have to deal with Ziff and Belle. It was just bad enough that she had to deal with them at school. They would mock Grandpa Emmett, who they believed was a real madman. They were quite hypocrites, as they sure had no qualms with taking advantage of the inventions he was responsible for.

"Are you okay, sis?" asked Will, gently. "Everything will really be fine. We really won't be alone, y'know. After all, Uncle Rhett and Aunt Jill will be there, too - as well as our cousins, Riley and Rebecca. So we won't be completely surrounded by all bullies."

"I guess you're right, Will," Stephanie replied, sighing. "It is very ironic how Riley and Rebecca also come from a family of bullies, but it's quite good that a sizeable amount of the family are also comprised of nice people. I guess it's about time to get going."

Her father then stepped into the room, and said, "Yeah, kids, your mom and I are just about ready to get going. I know you kids are just dreading this, but it's sure only one time of year. Anyway, I know just how much you kids like Riley and Rebecca. Like it or not, kin is kin. It was nice of Grandpa Miff and Grandma Anne to organize this for us."

"Yeah, I guess you're right," replied Stephanie, and she and Will followed their father downstairs. "It's just that, I don't quite understand why he invited Uncle Griff and his kids along. I mean, they might be our relatives - but they're still complete assholes."

"It really is strange to think that Grandpa Miff was a bully in his youth," added Will. "I know Uncle Cliff died of a heart failure back in 2018, and I sure feel very bad that he raised Uncle Griff to be a bully. He actually was a bad example for his son, y'know."

Re: Okay, here you go... icepiegon23 December 8 2007, 16:24:04 UTC

Hey nice touch having Jill marry Rhett Unger. I suppose this means thay you'll have to inlcude Roxas and Rebecca as well.

Re: Okay, here you go... icepiegon23 December 8 2007, 16:25:21 UTC

I meant Roxas asnd Ruby.

Re: Okay, here you go... bttf4444 December 8 2007, 16:37:37 UTC

Well, I'll see I can find a way to include him in here - maybe from the Canata side. Otherwise, as a twist, I was thinking of pairing Stephanie and Will up with Roxas and Ruby - whom they're not technically related to.

Do you have any suggestions?

Re: Okay, here you go... icepiegon23 December 8 2007, 16:41:11 UTC

How are you going to do that? It's not like Betsy and Marluxia Canata had another daughter named Billie who was the same age as Ryan unger and they end up getting together and giving birth to Roxas and Ruby.

Re: Okay, here you go... bttf4444 December 8 2007, 16:56:05 UTC

Yeah, then it won't work. I'll just go ahead with my twist romance idea, then - since there really isn't a way to make them part of the Tannen/Canata family.

Re: Okay, here you go... icepiegon23 December 8 2007, 16:57:45 UTC

Well Roxas and Ruby would have to show because of there second cousins.

Re: Okay, here you go... bttf4444 December 8 2007, 17:00:01 UTC

Okay, then I try to figure out a good reason for Grandpa Miff to invite them. It would be nice to include then, I agree.

Re: Okay, here you go... icepiegon23 December 8 2007, 17:05:09 UTC

You mentioned earlier that Max is a half brother to the unger twins of 2006 and Hannah Needles. Perhaps his kid Maclom marries Rhonda but the kids take after there grampa.

Re: Okay, here you go... bttf4444 December 8 2007, 17:08:10 UTC

Sounds good! I'll do it bthat way, then. :)

Re: Okay, here you go... bttf4444 December 9 2007, 14:47:13 UTC

I'm trying to think if there's a better way to do this:

Fist off, I'm thinking of Rhett and Rhonda as being the children of Ron and Bethany. So Ryan and Reba would be the children of Rex and Bridget.

I'm looking through my family trees right now, and I've already paired Malcolm Dixon is already the father to Manual, Michelle Dixon, Misha Dixon, and Maddy Dixon.

Maybe Malcolm has a sister, Melissa, who marries Ryan Unger. Although, that wouldn't place Roxas and Ruiby in the Tannen Family.

Let's see. On the Canata side, maybe Benny and Beth have a younger (and nicer) sister named Britney. Also, maybe Britney is raised up by Marluxia's mother - because Marluxia and Betsy got in a fatal car accident. Maybe Marluxia's parents were divorced, and he grew up with his father - who was a bad influence on him. He's now dead, too - so Marluxia's mother ends up caring for her.

Re: Okay, here you go... bttf4444 December 9 2007, 14:49:39 UTC

Or maybe Billie, as you've suggested earlier.

Re: Okay, here you go... icepiegon23 December 9 2007, 14:51:24 UTC

Nah i dont like the thougt of divorce so Have marluxia's parents stay together and keep Marluxia and Betsy alive but have it so tha Brithey is still around and hey wait a minute we already have a Britney Canata in 2046 as one of the bullies. Just have it so that Britney was born with a concience much like Bill Tannen was okay.

Re: Okay, here you go... bttf4444 December 9 2007, 15:21:51 UTC

Oh, yeah, I forgot about that Britney. I'll use Billie, then. Okay, yeah, I'll keep everyone alive and together.

Re: Okay, here you go... icepiegon23 December 9 2007, 15:23:20 UTC

Thanks man. You're the Best.

Re: Okay, here you go... bttf4444 December 9 2007, 15:35:36 UTC

You're welcome, and thank you! :) Okay, here's what I figured out. Miff and Anne ended up babysitting Billie a lot, so Billie learned her manners from them - and became best friends with Jill. Griff and his wife don't mind her being good, as they find her to be very useful with doing the household chores and all that.

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