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A Sample Of Ziff's Confrontation

Nov 11, 2007 02:03

Ziff's gang storms into Psychedelic PstandAs Marty Jr was glancing through the menu for desserts, he figured the strawberry shortcake really looked great. He was thinking of how surreal this whole experience was. Just then, a gang of real tough-looking teens stormed in - and he noticed that the group leader looked a lot like Griff Tannen. Marty Jr ( Read more... )

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Ziff's Confrotantation response icepiegon23 November 11 2007, 17:00:53 UTC

Nice Job now i'll have something more to look foward to in the Belle Confrotation sample. Hey are you going to have it so that the introduction of the gang members in Belle's gang are introduced like their brothers were.

Re: Ziff's Confrotantation response bttf4444 November 11 2007, 17:13:08 UTC

Thanks! :) It was easier for me to do the Ziff's Confrontation thing, since I just had to make some modifications to a scene I already wrote.

The Belle Tannen one might be a little harder to write. Maybe she contronts our guys, as they're leaving Psychedelic Pstand. Yeah, I'll probably do the introductions in a similar fashion.

Now off to add the good Ungers! :)

Re: Ziff's Confrotantation response icepiegon23 November 11 2007, 17:31:34 UTC

Actually i think she should confront our guys after Chuck Needles tells her what happened to her brother earlier to make her go for revenge.

Re: Ziff's Confrotantation response bttf4444 November 11 2007, 17:39:35 UTC

Okay, sounds good! I was thinking outside of Psychedelic Pstand, because the chases usually take place around downtown Hill Valley.

Re: Ziff's Confrotantation response ext_4405254 December 1 2017, 21:57:45 UTC

You're welcome. That is a good idea. You should go for it.

Re: Ziff's Confrotantation response bttf4444 November 11 2007, 17:17:08 UTC

You've suggested Bella for the good Canata. I was just thinking, don't you think that name is a little too similar to Belle?

Re: Ziff's Confrotantation response icepiegon23 November 11 2007, 17:24:31 UTC

Nope it's very good and it shows the good side of one's name. right beides the names are different.

Re: Ziff's Confrotantation response bttf4444 November 11 2007, 17:38:01 UTC

Okay, got it! I guess I was just thinking that neither name is especially common, but I see your point.

Re: Ziff's Confrotantation response icepiegon23 November 12 2007, 00:07:12 UTC

so have you made steady progress yet. by the way i was watching the Next Iron Chef Marathon up to the season finale.

Re: Ziff's Confrotantation response icepiegon23 November 12 2007, 02:24:10 UTC

Just for the record i'm still here you know

Re: Ziff's Confrotantation response bttf4444 November 12 2007, 02:41:57 UTC

Yeah, I'm just about to start working on the Belle confrontation. Then I'll start on the Thanksgiving fics, as well. :) How does Haven Universe Chronicles sound, to you? Those aren't so much adventure stories, as much as they are bits and pieces of the McFly family life of the third generation.

Re: Ziff's Confrotantation response icepiegon23 November 12 2007, 02:45:52 UTC

The Haven Universe Chronicles sounds great and excellent.

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