i gots an idea?cloudygirl103July 14 2007, 20:53:38 UTC
umm u said u will take succgestions, right? well i got one for Twins Universe..how about it is april fools day & marty & calvin switched places. Then doc & his family decide 2 travel bac in time 2 1897 2 see clara's parents. but then Calvin gets challenged 2 a horse race between him & buford. Calvin gets violently thrown off the horse & when buford was laughing at calvin he was not paying attention & crashed into a barrel of manure..lol Calvin ends up breaking his leg.since he & marty are twins & they have a special bond ..since Calvin broke his leg marty's leg got greatly weaker & he falls down & sprains his knee..doc felt so bad for the twins that he decided 2 cut the trip short & get some real medical help for Marty & Calvin. So for a fast remedy he goes to the future 2016. & doc marty & calvin meet their future sons - calvin jr. & marty jr. marty & calvin jr break down & started crying at the sight of their fathers. So how it ends is marty & calvin get better & apologize for causing so much trouble. The doc warns calvin he should not have taken part in the race b/c he was not very goot at riding horses. Calvin apologized again & the doc treated them to The Spare Rib for some Dinner. Well thats my idea u can change it any way you want. I really hope that u use it though. ko? byebyes 4 now
Re: i gots an idea?bttf4444July 14 2007, 22:40:58 UTC
Thanks for the suggestion! I'll see what I can do. Doc never met Clara in the Twins Universe - and, when Marty and Doc of the Trilogy Universe visit the Twins Universe in The Way We Could've Been, Doc of the Twins Universe is already with a lady named Jessica Hoffman - who is Clara's great-great-grandneice.
BTW, you should read The Way We Could've Been, if you haven't done so already. The Twins Universe is the first stop for Trilogy Doc and Marty - and the last universe they visit is the Almanac Universe, which features Hell Valley Marty as Calvin and Hell Valley Doc as Christopher Lloyd Brown. It's 30 chapters, though - so it's a long read.
Maybe I would do is have Doc and the twins go back to September 5 of 1885, because they want to witness the beginning of the clock. Because Doc isn't a blacksmith in this universe, Buford isn't after him. However, he still shows up at the festival to start trouble - and, maybe what happens is, the twins end up angering Buford, so Buford challenges Calvin on a horse race.
As for possible names, maybe Clint and Rhett Eastwood.
I also like the idea of going to 2016, and seeing Marty Jr and Calvin Jr once again. Because Doc never marries Clara, there is no Harmony Brown in 2016 in the Twins Universe. Because Marty chose to not race Needles, the kids are in much better condition - and they don't remember Marty and Calvin from October 20 of 2015, as they never showed up in the new timeline. Maybe the kids even beg Doc to let them spend some time in 1986.
Dinner at The Spare Rib sounds like a good ending for the story.
We can continue to plan ideas together for this story, and I should be able to get this story started by next month. I currently have six stories that are in progress - and, actually seven, if you count Let Freedom Ring. That story is pretty much on the back burner right now, though.
Then doc & his family decide 2 travel bac in time 2 1897 2 see clara's parents. but then Calvin gets challenged 2 a horse race between him & buford. Calvin gets violently thrown off the horse & when buford was laughing at calvin he was not paying attention & crashed into a barrel of manure..lol Calvin ends up breaking his leg.since he & marty are twins & they have a special bond ..since Calvin broke his leg marty's leg got greatly weaker & he falls down & sprains his knee..doc felt so bad for the twins that he decided 2 cut the trip short & get some real medical help for Marty & Calvin. So for a fast remedy he goes to the future 2016. & doc marty & calvin meet their future sons - calvin jr. & marty jr. marty & calvin jr break down & started crying at the sight of their fathers. So how it ends is marty & calvin get better & apologize for causing so much trouble. The doc warns calvin he should not have taken part in the race b/c he was not very goot at riding horses. Calvin apologized again & the doc treated them to The Spare Rib for some Dinner. Well thats my idea u can change it any way you want. I really hope that u use it though. ko? byebyes 4 now
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BTW, you should read The Way We Could've Been, if you haven't done so already. The Twins Universe is the first stop for Trilogy Doc and Marty - and the last universe they visit is the Almanac Universe, which features Hell Valley Marty as Calvin and Hell Valley Doc as Christopher Lloyd Brown. It's 30 chapters, though - so it's a long read.
Maybe I would do is have Doc and the twins go back to September 5 of 1885, because they want to witness the beginning of the clock. Because Doc isn't a blacksmith in this universe, Buford isn't after him. However, he still shows up at the festival to start trouble - and, maybe what happens is, the twins end up angering Buford, so Buford challenges Calvin on a horse race.
As for possible names, maybe Clint and Rhett Eastwood.
I also like the idea of going to 2016, and seeing Marty Jr and Calvin Jr once again. Because Doc never marries Clara, there is no Harmony Brown in 2016 in the Twins Universe. Because Marty chose to not race Needles, the kids are in much better condition - and they don't remember Marty and Calvin from October 20 of 2015, as they never showed up in the new timeline. Maybe the kids even beg Doc to let them spend some time in 1986.
Dinner at The Spare Rib sounds like a good ending for the story.
We can continue to plan ideas together for this story, and I should be able to get this story started by next month. I currently have six stories that are in progress - and, actually seven, if you count Let Freedom Ring. That story is pretty much on the back burner right now, though.
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