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bsofthewest

Wednesday, November 21, 2007, 8:00pm

Feb 16, 2008 12:50

I have been sitting on this since November, working out the kinks. Read and let me know if you think it is good enough to post to the world. Our world that is. Do you think I have the personalities clear? I really need feed back, so I can get past the hurdle of level one. I don't want it to me me in the story, I want you to read them ( Read more... )

same angst, same night, same problem

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orangepeel February 17 2008, 07:09:17 UTC

BS - this is really great improvement!! You really are trying to get better hey? It's an interesting take on Chenzel too, love the ambiguity of the narration. And it should be posted somewhere (though create a backlog of chapters if you do follow through, I don't want to be left hanging)

"She was wearing a knock out dress that had half the front removed. "
- funnnyyyy haha, couldn't that describe ALL of Kristin's PD costumes?

And Kristin's feelings on Enchanted could have been written by me ;), hehe

bsofthewest February 17 2008, 15:02:20 UTC

Thanks, ever so. I am trying here. It makes me happy you liked it, but I think this is a one shot because it is a snap shot in time.
As to "She was wearing a knock out dress that had half the front removed. " My favorite line!!!
Thanks again! Now to think of another fic. Perhaps the Oscars will provide a hint of angst!

orangepeel February 18 2008, 07:27:24 UTC

Oh BS, if only you just how much I am expecting from the Oscars.

Who knows, maybe I will even be inspired! Hehe.

And you know, I'm getting more and more convinced that is Kristin Chenoweth's profile. I think it is.

bsofthewest February 18 2008, 07:56:01 UTC

That would be soooo cool. Why don't you go to her real fan site, where she has posted letters and compare the writing styles. That might prove useful.

orangepeel February 18 2008, 10:04:50 UTC

Haha, I could do that one time, I might in fact.

I'm pretty convinced it is her. I was messaging a lady via MySpace who was messaging her about the two times her 9 year old daughter had met Kristin (once it was privately, in a shopping complex, so it was a more.. intimate/memorable meeting). The lady said there wasn't really any specific information needed.. but there's something also.

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