Inhale, Exhale (The Ripples in a Lake Remix) for obsessive-a101

Jun 15, 2014 22:48

Title: Inhale, Exhale (The Ripples in a Lake Remix)
Characters: Laura Roslin, Bill Adama, Dr Cottle, Layne Ishay, Natalie, Caprica Six, Sharon Agathon, Hera Agathon
Pairing: Laura/Bill
Rating: T
Warnings: canon character death
Summary: A butterfly’s wings and a breath of air; musings on life lived.
Original Story: Pause, Review by obsessive_a101
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lanalucy June 16 2014, 05:25:50 UTC
Lovely.

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astreamofstars June 22 2014, 20:42:49 UTC
Thank you :)

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afrakaday June 19 2014, 00:47:23 UTC
This is ridiculously, wonderfully beautiful. I teared up! So much love for and among the characters.

An excellent piece of writing. Thanks.

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astreamofstars June 22 2014, 20:44:11 UTC
Thank you, hon :) It was driving me nuts because it wouldn't coalesce into what I wanted it to be, but I'm really glad it touched you enough for you to leave this lovely comment. I appreciate it ♥

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nicole_anell June 26 2014, 15:37:25 UTC
Oh my gosh, this is beautifully written! I love all the different POVs but I really have a soft spot for the Hera section (RARA *flails and cries*) and Cottle and Ishay as well. Lovely fic.

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astreamofstars June 26 2014, 16:01:23 UTC
Thank you, hon :) I really appreciate that.

My niece has a cousin named Laura, and aged two, she always called her Rara, so I eternally steal it for our poor Laura.

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angelof9 June 26 2014, 17:43:35 UTC
This is really nice! Thanks for sharing. x

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newnumbertwo June 29 2014, 15:28:08 UTC
This is gorgeous! I love all the vignettes, each representing a way Laura has connected with the various people she's encountered. So beautiful and moving, and I love the way Natalie admires Laura and is fascinated by her, by this different kind of death, and the hope they'll meet at the Shore.

Lovely, lovely work.

♥ ♥ ♥

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