Two Months, Two Weeks and Two Days, for letterstonorah

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Title: Two Months, Two Weeks and Two Days
Author: kag523
Original Story: Other Side, letterstonorah
Pairing: Lee/ Kara
Word Count: ~ 2,300 words
Rating: NC-17 for sexuality, suicidal thoughts and mature themes
Summary: Lee struggles to get start his life alone on New Earth.
Spoilers: Everything including Daybreak.
Disclaimer: Not for

Comments

[koolaidmom11]

Wow!!! That was both unbelievably depressing and beautiful.. Poor Lee...was that really Kara at the end?

[kag523]

Thanks, hon! I'm glad you found it beautiful. :)

Poor Lee...was that really Kara at the end?

I leave it up to you how you want to read it. I mean I chose the title for a reason - when she comes back after Maelstrom, Lee tells her she's been gone more than two months. I think it was two months, two weeks and two days. ;) But you can decide.

[callmeonetrack]

So, so sad, but lovely writing. <3 I'm gonna choose to believe she did become corporeal again at the end there. ;)

[kag523]

Thank you hon. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and although I've left it nebulous, I happen to agree with your read on the ending. :)

[scifishipper]

Sweet and desperate and so soulful. I loved the snippets of Zak, the longing for her since their first meeting, and how he always chased her, just behind, but never quite captured her. It's so damn sad, but it's also full of love. And yes, she came back. She had to come back. Lovely writing.

[kag523]

Thank you, H. It was hard not to say that since you commented, but I'm thanking you NOW. This comment made me very happy. *hugs* K :)

[kag523]

I am THRILLED at your reaction, and so glad that you enjoyed it. I did, indeed, look at your other stories, but they are all so beautifully 'complete' that I didn't want to fiddle with them. This one - because you'd focused so completely on Kara - let me look into Lee's chaos. Thank you for sharing YOUR talents and letting me play with your ideas! *hugs* K :)

[kag523]

Thanks, hon! I am glad that Lee's focus on the tangible worked in the retelling. It's funny how physically oriented he is, despite being the one who sees Kara return. The uncertainty of the ending felt right. I want the readers to decide what they think has actually happened there at the end. :)