Demeter, for rayruz

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Title: Demeter
Author: letterstonorah
Summary: Years after the trauma she faced on New Caprica, Kara deals with the continuing challenges of being a mother and a partner.
Characters/Pairings: Kara/Lee, Seph (rayruz’s OC)
Rating: PG13
Words: 1500
Warnings: None, really. Sexy time?
Disclaimer: Not mine, obvi. Actually, doubly not mine.

original story is “

Comments

[rayruz]

Oh my god! I am so thrilled! This is such a wonderful look at how Kara is coping all those years later. It's really wonderful to see how even though she has gotten so much better she still has her trauma but is able to work through it. And there is so much LOVE in this fic. :D everyone is happy! I really enjoy the way you write and describe Seph. Guhhh so much cute. This happy little family means so much to me I am so glad you remixed it mystery writer!

[callmeonetrack]

This is really lovely, especially those last lines. I also thought the bit about the triggers in winter was very insightful and fitting. Kara's internal voice is both thoughtful and funny here too! Nice job!

[scifishipper]

This whole thing had me tearing up. It's so beautiful and sweet with dark edges that almost consume. I felt Kara's fear so clearly with the phrasing at the beginning and then slowing down, talking to herself, reminding herself what she has now. I love that she's pregnant again and sees it as life and hope and that she is so in love with her family. She deserves it. They all do.

Beautiful work that completely honors the original. I love it!

[rodlox]

a very beautiful fic.

Kara's doing very well - I liked the numbers and the breathing and reasons.

bravo!

[nicole_anell]

Oh, this is really nice. I love how you captured Kara's POV especially in her stream of consciousness at the beginning - it dealt with her lingering trauma but was still sweet and hopeful at the same time.