Her Cloudy Trophies (The ‘Go Not to Lethe’ Remix), by munditia

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Title: Her Cloudy Trophies (The ‘Go Not to Lethe’ Remix)
Author: munditia aka having_written
Summary: Dee prays because Earth is the one belief she refuses to let go.
Characters / Pairing: Dee, Dee/Lee (with implied Lee/Kara)
Rating: PG-13 (or maybe a light R)
Warnings: Nothing worse than in canon.
Word Count: > 6,500
Original Story: Thy Vigils Keep by queenofthorns

Comments

[beatrice_otter]

Oh, wow. This is awesome, and heartbreaking, and perfect.

[fallingtowers]

Thanks a lot! Feedback such as this makes this writer a very happy herdbot. :)

[callmeonetrack]

This is stunning and breathtaking and very, very clever in its repurposing and rearranging. ♥

[fallingtowers]

Thank you! I'm glad my remix worked for you since you obviously know and appreciate the wonderful original.

[scifishipper]

I like the original story's bits woven into the new fic. You've done a good job of showing Dee becoming more and more despondent, responding only to pain and eschewing tenderness. This is a clever re-mix, reversing the roles and showing us the path to Dee's suicide. It makes perfect sense. Nice work.

[fallingtowers]

Thank you very much for your great feedback!

[rose_griffes]

I knew what was coming and I still teared up as I got closer to the end. Oh, Dee...

[fallingtowers]

Um, I'm kind of sorry that I made you cry...? (I can't be entirely sorry, I'm afraid, since teary eyes do show that the remix works. :P)

[scifiaddict86]

I really love this I think it captures what Dee went through so beautifully.

[fallingtowers]

Thanks a bunch! It's good to hear that the characterization worked for you.