They Shoot Cylons, Don't They? (The Forgiveness & Stuff Remix), by amathela

Apr 22, 2010 17:00

Title: They Shoot Cylons, Don't They? (The Forgiveness & Stuff Remix)
Author: amathela
Summary: He doesn't expect to see one of the toasters helping them, and he doesn't recognise her; he learned to block out her face, the particular way she smiled, long ago.
Spoilers up to episode 2:20 - Lay Down Your Burdens (Part Two); slightly AU for season three ( Read more... )

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sunshine_queen April 23 2010, 01:36:19 UTC
Oh, I really like the way this is written, with the short sections and parentheses and the way it's written like thoughts. It's a powerful way to present how Lee would feel.

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puszysty April 23 2010, 03:19:19 UTC
This is an interesting approach to the remix. Think I'll have to read the original now, as my mind is all "pegasus after New Caprica, huh?"

I especially like this line: She was never really real to begin with, and if he's imagining her now -Maybe he always was.

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slippery_fish April 24 2010, 11:48:00 UTC
some really great lines in there

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trovia April 25 2010, 12:39:37 UTC
I'm a sucker for unusual character combinations, so I loved this a lot. I like the text design you chose, the way you cover a lot of ground, moving through all of Lee and Boomer's history. One thing that I liked in particular was how you compared the actions of Cylon!Sharon with the actions of supposedly human!Sharon. That was a very striking difference, and it makes a lot of sense that Lee would struggle with it in this way.

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nicole_anell May 11 2010, 05:08:34 UTC
I like the stream of consciousness of this, especially when he's almost taking a tally of the good vs. bad things Boomer has done.

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