Remembered, by lorrainemarker

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Title: Remembered
remix author: lorrainemarker
Summary: At the end Bill Adama had one last duty
Pairing: B.Adama/Roslin
Rating: FRM
Warnings: Canon compliant character death & strong sexual content
beta-reader: thanks to scifishipper
Original Fic: Remix of What You Remember, by frakcancerDISCLAIMER: All characters, rights, and revenue remain with the wonderfully creative team that

Comments

[trialia]

Beautiful.

[lorrainemarker]

Thank you.

[kappamaki33]

Aw, so sad, but so pretty, too!

[lorrainemarker]

Thanks.

[lorrainemarker]

Thanks.

[usagi636]

You need a tissue warning for this fic. *sniffles*
lovely!!

"You still want to remember me?" she’d asked him once.

"I don't think I could forget you."

loved this!!

[lorrainemarker]

Thank you. The lines you loved were the first written and what got this story going.

[frakcancer]

So many lovely lines:

any of the other nonsense that had grown around her
(Yes, she didn't seek it, as shown by her being startled at the genuflection on the Astral Queen)

It wasn’t love, until suddenly it was.
Score!

Bill's being so careful with Sick!Laura. Healthy!Laura doing what Bill had never dared to do and leaving her mark on his body.

I love it when Roslin and Adama share like any other lovers the small, inconsequential details of their past, like the scar on her knee.

I love that you took tropes from other stories I've done, like trying to be precise with Roslin's use of language ("soul" instead of "person") and her hanging her clothes up carefully before sex.

Great job.

[lorrainemarker]

I'm so glad you enjoyed this. You have such a lovely precise writing style, which is quite different from mine. I really wanted the remix to be different, but still flow within your river of work. What You Remember was the story I remixed, but I did try and draw on your themes and characterization of their relationship.

Thank you.