No Companionship, by nnaylime

Apr 16, 2010 17:03

Title: No Companionship
remix author: nnaylime
Summary: A look into the inner mind of Richard Adar’s wife. Though I’m telling this story in the 2nd person, I feel it necessary to note that in developing this character’s back story, I’ve named her Lisa.
Title, Author, & URL of the original story: A remix of icedteainthebag’s story If There are None, Travel Alone. It ( Read more... )

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scifishipper April 16 2010, 23:09:42 UTC
An interesting perspective. I like her toughness and resolve to move on, but the sadness is vivid. This is a lovely complement to the original. Well done.

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bsg_aussiegirl April 16 2010, 23:30:41 UTC
This is a very sad perspective of the Adar's marriage. Well done though. Thanks.

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lorrainemarker April 16 2010, 23:40:18 UTC
There was a lot I admired about Laura Roslin, but one of the things I didn't like about her was her affair with Richard Adar. It always bugged me, because on the other side of that equation was his wife. Thank you for giving her perspective with such tender toughness.

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brennanspeaks April 17 2010, 00:06:12 UTC
This was an exceptional little ficlet. Despite the lack of source material on either Adar, I could picture this quite clearly and the tension between them is perfect.

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lls_mutant April 17 2010, 00:46:30 UTC
Infidelity is a squick of mine, but this is exactly why. Ouch. Very well done.

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