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Fic: Laura/D'anna

Mar 12, 2007 22:02

Title: Game
Author: cannibalcake
Word Count: 3641
Pairing: Laura/D'anna
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Through Occupation/Precipice
Note: This was originally written for the spread_the_fear Laura Roslin bondage challenge, but was too late and too long. The prompts were as follows ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, laura/d'anna

Comments 19

pocketwitch March 13 2007, 02:43:08 UTC

Yay! See, I always knew you could do it. *grin*

I enjoyed it yet again. I am so very glad you finished and shared it!

cannibalcake March 13 2007, 02:55:26 UTC

Wheee! I feel like an anvil has just been lifted from my shoulders! Teehee.

I think I'm gonna go back to comedy for awhile at least. My brain needs a break! :D

Don't know if I could have done it without the pompopms. ;) Did I mention, thanks! ;-D

pocketwitch March 13 2007, 03:05:44 UTC

You are pompom worthy, chica. ;D

bodhi_chenrezig March 13 2007, 02:49:06 UTC

Damnn....that's the hottest thing I've read in a long, long time. Very nice.

cannibalcake March 13 2007, 02:56:18 UTC

Woohoo! Successful smut! :D Thanks a bunch!

poisoniv13 March 13 2007, 04:46:39 UTC

DUDE...definitely worth the wait. I can't believe you didn't let D'Anna get off tho- ur cruel!! Hope that means there'll be a sequel hahaha

cannibalcake March 13 2007, 04:56:26 UTC

I knew you were going to say something about a sequel! *shudders at the idea*

I just got this damned thing done and posted and now you're talking to me about sequels!

:P

katlife March 13 2007, 13:11:35 UTC

Some perfect phrases in there...eg...
Laura's touches were painfully gentle and soft; not at all what D'anna was prepared for based on the former President's earlier enthusiasm. She found she was once again caught by surprise by this enigmatic woman
Given this was pretty much a PWP (now that I know what that means ;), you had some very poetic moments.
Ta muchly.
And even better that D'Anna was left wanting....as we all are now....a sequel is definitely, to paraphrase my meta-muse pocketwitch, a pom-pom worthy event. Can I call up some Cheerleaders for you?

cannibalcake March 13 2007, 18:07:57 UTC

Wow, thank you! This is my first real smut piece and also my first non-comedic work of fiction (fan or otherwise), so it's very exciting to have the word poetic anywhere near my fic! PWP! YAY!

There most likely will be a sequel, but I have to admit this was a bitch to write, so I think I might have to take a break to write some more funny stuff first, just to get my brain working again (I think it shut down somewhere in the third rewrite). :D

ana_khouri March 13 2007, 14:33:09 UTC

agh! Yes. Sequel. poor D'anna! but interesting dynamic... : )

cannibalcake March 13 2007, 18:10:20 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm sure there'll be a sequel. I do feel bad for D'anna too. ;)