Comments | bsg_femslash: Laura/Kara, 'Temple'

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Laura/Kara, 'Temple'

Jan 22, 2007 21:45

Title: Temple
Author: pocketwitch
Pairing: Laura Rosln/Kara Thrace
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Mid season 2.
Author's Note: This is the 4th part in my Laura/Kara series. It was originally meant as a one-shot. Riiiiggghhhttt.

Part One | Part Two | Part Three

Again, many, many, many thanks to mesoterica for her extremely helpful and insightful beta work. * ( Read more... )

kara/laura, rating: nc-17

Comments 30

carla_scribbles January 23 2007, 03:57:59 UTC

... you do know there is no way to respond to this without verging on the TMI, don't you?

Nice. Very, very... nice.

pocketwitch January 23 2007, 04:04:19 UTC

*wicked giggle* I am so, so very glad to have caused a TMI-bordering response crisis.

Thank you. I'm so pleased that you liked it.

dathon January 23 2007, 03:58:55 UTC

Beautiful. You've captured the exact right balance between emotion, thought and raw sex. It's so refreshing to read something that's well-written and well-written porn.

pocketwitch January 23 2007, 04:04:54 UTC

Thank you very much, that is an amazing compliment, and I very much appreciate it.

cannibalcake January 23 2007, 05:47:42 UTC

Oh my. I love the way you write the characters of Kara and Laura...

::runs off for a cold shower::

pocketwitch January 23 2007, 05:51:41 UTC

*grin* Thank you! They're definitely planting themselves rather firmly in my head, I'm glad to hear that you like my versions of them.

Enjoy your shower. *giggle*

cannibalcake January 24 2007, 00:46:12 UTC

I was thinking about your fic today and was inspired to make this!

( ... )

pocketwitch January 24 2007, 01:04:21 UTC

Dude! My story inspired purty, purty photoshop porn! YES! *bighugegrin* That is lovely! Thank you so much for sharing it!

apophantic January 23 2007, 09:09:21 UTC

.......

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uh...*gah* amazing.
this:
Nights of fighting her brain to keep it from reminding her how Kara had kissed her with such relish, kissed her as though she wanted to be doing nothing so much as that in that moment. Reminding her how Kara had raced to give her pleasure, had laid her down on the altar of mud and rocks and grass and whispered prayers into her second heart until her mindbodysoul had room left for nothing save her own prayer of please, please, please.
that is, from what i've read of your writing, the best paragraph that you have *ever* written.
awesome. i was right there, it was amazing.
thank you for updating, and please keep doing so! no one writes laura/kara like you do... XD

pocketwitch January 23 2007, 15:14:09 UTC

I'm so glad you liked that paragraph; I think it may have been my favorite paragraph in the story, too, so it tickles me that it hit you so strongly as well. Thank you for pointing that out!

Thank you so much for the comment! And don't worry, it seems like I'm in no danger of stopping at the moment, if the nonstop ideas floating around my head are any indication ...

bodhi_chenrezig January 23 2007, 17:59:31 UTC

Fucking beautiful. Sexy and intense and lyrically beautiful. Loving this.

So...when does the Pres. jump on our little fighter pilot?

pocketwitch January 23 2007, 18:08:42 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm so glad that you're enjoying it!

As for Laura jumping Kara ... soon. Maybe in the next part, though no promises just yet. But I do promise that it will happen.