Ummm, probably the best BSG fic i've read in forever! I love your pwp but this is wack! This is tripping me out man :P Gonne read the rest when i get home from work!
'he observed full bosoms that were straining to escape the constraints of their bodice.'= GOLDEN.
I was chuckling at work. It is pretty frakking funny. Yet so amazingly good. I think you should take that "didn't finish school" thing off your profile... cause you're a better writer than most of the fanfic writers around! Man, i finished school and I don't have the skilllz you have!
Just found this on your site and anxious to read where you go with it. Fun start. I think my favorite parst are the description of Laura and Tigh's remarks.
I'm sorry, I haven't finished it yet. But I will. It's one of my favourites and I was hoping it wouldn't go on as long as my other multi-chapter stories.
Okay, I have given in and started this one. :-) You are very clever, speaking of "ships" and "passengers" without directly specifying what kind of journey they are going on (sea or space... right now I'm thinking sea.)
It's nice to see that the Commander, at least, is a broad-minded sort, willing to cooperate with a mere female. (HA! Oh, I can't wait for her to pwn him extra hard at something.)
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'he observed full bosoms that were straining to escape the constraints of their bodice.'= GOLDEN.
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It's nice to see that the Commander, at least, is a broad-minded sort, willing to cooperate with a mere female. (HA! Oh, I can't wait for her to pwn him extra hard at something.)
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Of course the Commander is the broad-minded sort! Ha! He's gorgeous!
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