Challenge 2: "No Cigar"

Feb 12, 2005 20:40

TITLE: No Cigar
AUTHOR: Ancarett
PAIRING: Kara/Lee
SPOILER: Vaguely up to Episode 9
RATING: PG-13
DISCLAIMER: It's not mine. I wish it were mine, but it's not. Therapy bills mount.
ARCHIVING: Just let me know.
WORD COUNT: 1000 words on the dot. Read that and weep!

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bantha_fodder February 13 2005, 02:00:17 UTC
<3

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boofadil February 13 2005, 02:14:21 UTC
love this.

it doesn't comply with the challenge, but i dig it. *g*

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ancarett February 13 2005, 02:18:22 UTC
Dang! Where did I miss out on the challenge? Start with dialogue. End with dialogue. Item to be in dispute from character A to B. In one character voice.

Dang! Now I'm going to go over the challenge terms again.

/headdesk

Thanks for the love and digginess, though. Much appreciated.

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ancarett February 13 2005, 02:20:49 UTC
Oh, bunny droppings! First person! Too many rules, dangit! I thought I had them all!

/headdesk

/headdesk

/headdesk

Ouch. I need a cigar, now. Or an Apollo.

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boofadil February 13 2005, 02:23:09 UTC
you did pretty good though...that was the only one you missed.

that and even your third person is omniscent instead of just from kara's head.

but it's a good ficlet! so says meeeeeee.

/hyper.

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svilleficrecs February 13 2005, 07:21:04 UTC
Um, exceptions tend to be made for good fic, is all I'm saying. And the actually getting it in at 1000 words. :) Counts for a lot. I myself am a lil wary of the first person. Did it half as a challenge for myself. Luve what you've done w/ it, though.

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ancarett February 14 2005, 01:56:04 UTC
Thank you. Still beating my head on the desk, intermittently, over missing that.

Gah. If I get through my mound of other responsibilities for the next few days, I might try a fp story and see if I can get this right!

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ancarett February 14 2005, 01:52:41 UTC
Sorry! But I must say, I think that your new idea trumps mine!

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burntcopper February 14 2005, 01:09:04 UTC
Okay, I'm all for killing Kara for leaving right there. Gah!

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ancarett February 14 2005, 01:53:48 UTC
She was positively rotten there? I believe I muttered brat as I wrote that passage. If it were up to me, they would have stayed in that clinch a fair while longer but Kara really wanted that cigar!

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