SS#15 baby-sitters european vacation, part seven: say goodbye to your friends
the next few days will be crazy because i'm getting another wisdom tooth taken out, so i decided to go ahead and post the end of our saga before i'm knocked the fuck out from pain. sorry i haven't responded to the comments on part six yet, things have been busy, but i did read them and they made my day. i love you guys. :D
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Considering she lives with the triplets, bitch has probably seen worse!--true true, i didn't even think of that!
I get wanting to write and all, but she really is missing the fun of Paris. Why not write about all the stuff she sees, if she's setting the story up for Mariel to go back in time...why not get all the info for certain places she visits and put them in the story? Mariel could go to the Bastille when the French Revoultion starts to take place or something!--seriously!
love the Planet of the Apes pic! Really is Mal's family!--haha, thanks!
I can hear my college creative writing professor screaming all the way in Jersey over the WTF of this sentence!--LOL!!
*HEADDESK FOR DAYS!--seriously, bitch does not know how to write a non=mary sue character!
THEY CHOSE TO GO TO THE SEWERS RATHER THAN DISNEY? THEY DO KNOW THAT EURO DISNEY HAS STUFF THAT ORLANDO/CALI DOESN'T, RIGHT? I WOULD'VE WENT TO DISNEY!--LMFAO! yeah, i can see dawn being a snotty bitch because she apparently lives on disney's doorstep, but for seriously?!?
BOW CHICKA BOW WOW!--for real!
The Jesse Spano meme cracked me up!and the dancing Gangham Style Doctor Who characters!--yay! i love those too. lol.
HEADDESK HARDER!--i know, she can't converse with ANYONE without fucking baby-sitting coming up. jesus christ, kristy!
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My professor in Creative Writing in College HATED when people would use 'clinched lines'. I still swear I hear a faint scream from him whenever I use one!
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