Fic: Five Times Ray Made Fraser Laugh (due South)

[brynnmck]

Title: Five Times Ray Made Fraser Laugh
Pairing: Fraser/Vecchio
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Five times, laughter. Again.
Spoilers: Through "Call of the Wild"
Disclaimer: I am but mad north-northwest, and as the wind is southerly, I know characters that are mine from characters that are not mine. These are the latter

Comments

[sdwolfpup]

HI. I love this more than I can possibly express.

Something new I adored on this read-through?

like he was standing inside the sun

(Also? KOWALSKI HUNG UP ON FRASER TWICE IN HIS ELATION. My GOD I could not love that more.)

[brynnmck]

Hi. I love YOURS more than I can possibly express, so we're even. :)

And HEEEE, Kowalski. Can't you just picture that?

*click*
*pause*
*ring*
"Hello, Ray."
"Sorry about that, Fraser."

and then, like, five minutes later, in mid-spaz,

*click*
*pause*
*ring*
"Hello, Ray."

HEEEE. Oh, Kowalski. *snuggles him*

[aingeal8c]

Oh that's lovely and so nice and domestic too. I did liek the bit bitterweet touch to the psotcard (makes me cry every single time) and a happy ending yay.

It's great to have Fraser laugh too and that Ray is the cause.
:-)

[brynnmck]

Man, the postcard kills me, too. Heh. Thank you for the feedback! It was good to make them laugh. :)

[nos4a2no9]

I...wow. I am *stunned*. This was pretty much the perfect RayV/Fraser fic. You made me love them, and then you went and broke them, and then you fixed them again. I loved how warm and sexy and sweet things were between them, and I loved Fraser's no-joy laugh because of "Warm Me Up" (Fraser! woobie!) and Fraser's realization that he's tired and lonely and cold and is, well, kinda sick of it all. The ending made me squee with joy (Kowalski as a dad! Fraser and RayV together! yay!) and I loved this so very, very much.

[brynnmck]

Aww! *blush* This is wonderful feedback, thank you so much! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. :)

[settiai]

Wow. Just ... wow.

This is absolutely terrific.

[brynnmck]

Thank you! :D

[arrow00]

Writing is indeed weird, but yours is just wonderful.

>loudly-dressed Italian Moses
Oh, my.

>It was a fine line between solitude and loneliness
Poor Benny!

>The joy was so bright and sharp in Fraser's chest that he didn't know how he was going to survive it.
My heart smiled.

>"I mean it, Benny," Ray insisted, his voice low. "You're not getting rid of me this time."
And then my heart laughed.

Thank you for writing this!

[brynnmck]

Thank you for the lovely feedback! I hope to see more of your writing, too, at some point. :)