Fic: Wisely and Slow (due South)

[brynnmck]

Title: Wisely and Slow
Pairing: Ray/Ray
Rating: NC-17
Summary: The first time it happens is a complete fluke.
Spoilers: Through "Call of the Wild"
Disclaimer: I am but mad north-northwest, and as the wind is southerly, I know characters that are mine from characters that are not mine. These are the latter.

A/N: Written for ds_shakespeare, for the prompt "

Comments

[buzzylittleb]

This is made of awesome. Ray2 awesome. I love the way things develop and escalate and how Frannie is the only one with brains enough to know what is going on.

[brynnmck]

HEE. Yes. They do need their heads knocked together a bit sometimes. ;) Thank you!

[lamentables]

puts on that Steve McQueen cool that never quite covers all of him

Perfect!

<3 Frannie

his body still vibrating

I know how he feels ;-0

[brynnmck]

Heee. Yay! Thank you! :)

[lipstickcat]

Its been ages since I've read something that built up the sex scenes, and teased and promised and them came through for me. Just gorgeous! Hot, and meaningful ^_^

[brynnmck]

Oh, that's such lovely feedback, thank you so much!

[catwalksalone]

I must have done something good. Because two AMAZING Ray/Ray fics don't normally happen to me in one day.

I loved this so much. I have the stupidest grin on my face right now because RayV did what Frannie told him to do and jumped and she's totally right, RayK will stick and, and, and ... yay!

Such great voices and the little details like Ma's Hummel collection (and I have that image so vividly in my head now) and the map being turned right side up and Frannie taking care of her brother (sleep with him, Ray) in the reverse of him taking care of her (don't sleep with him, Frannie) in canon. Brilliant.

Oh, and Batman. Of course.

[brynnmck]

EEEE! *twirls you* Thank you so much! I am thrilled that you liked it, and that you picked up on my little "Heaven and Earth" tie-in; that's one of my favorite Vecchio and Frannie moments, and I couldn't resist playing off of that a bit.

And yes. BATMAN. ITA. Hee.

Thank you!!

[hurry_sundown]

Okay. So part of me is sitting here with my fingers in my ears going "La la la I can't hear you" because F/K is my stone OTP in this fandom.

But.

This is an insanely good story. It grabbed me by the throat right at the beginning, and dragged me headlong through to the end, ba-boom! Plus, you have one of the best takes on RayV ever.

Before Vegas, maybe, but Ray has scars now, things that had ultimately freaked Stella out more than they'd turned her on ...

Scary and sad at the same time - and did I mention? Really good.

[brynnmck]

Awww, thank you so much! I'm really happy that it worked for you. Thanks for giving it a shot!