A Birthday!
It had been perfect. They were alone in Grimmauld place, after Harry had spent weeks transfiguring it and redecorating for the second time. He had purchased a new, large four poster, with sleek, clean lines and a modern design without canopy hangings. He had done the house in contemporary shades of cream and white, and finally ( Read more... )
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There were so many things I loved in it. How Tonks kept testing him, really wanting to see if he was being genuine; and how she was feeling more and more elated everytime he answered the way she wanted him to. You kept it so believable.
And when she decided to disappear off to Korea, I must admit, something in my chest dropped a few inches.
And Harry's discussion with Ginny was really realistic too. Oh good Lawd. I could go on and on. Bill, Molly, Harry, Ginny and especially Tonks were great. (heheh, loved that she wanted a smoke... lolol)
Your last paragraph was particularly powerful too.
Well done! That was an exceptionally well written piece. I feel completely and utterly honoured that you wrote it for my birthday. *hugs madly* Thank you soooooooooooooo much.
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