AU Fic: Domina Cariño (9/?)

[brontok]

Domina Cariño (9/?)
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos
Rating: soft R (overall)
Word count: 853
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction.
Summary: This is a story about trust and control, in both love and lust.
Warning: Some parts (not all) may contain minor yet integral BDSM scenes/themes.

Comments

[dld_ftw]

I'm barely awake and I've already read this twice. Oh Sergio, you're such a mess. Telling people upcoming scenes is unforgiveable, btw. ;-) I do love that it was wanting Fernando that drove him out of his comfort zone again and also that he's thinking about freckles and drunk when he calls Lady O. Nino reminds him of Fer although it was the other way around in the beginning. It's like that line in Pulp's Babies "I know you won't believe it's true/I only went with her 'cuz she looks like you!" Poor boo thinks Fer is never coming back again and he drove another one away, doesn't he? These two are gloriously messed up. I love it. Sergio's right about one thing - Fer can control him by denying him which is exactly what he's doing right now, although I don't think it's intentional because Fer doesn't know which way is up right now. But by not being there when sergio wants/expects him to be, fer has upset sergio's applecart and sergio is bucking his routine. He's out drinking, calling doms, etc. By the same token, sese has changed fer's routine as well. Instead of being the bad ass cynical dom, he's at home staring at his bruise and unsure of himself. This is twisty bliss! Can't wait for more.

[dld_ftw]

I also love how Fer ate the pickles and onions from his sandwich. Nice touch. They fill in all of each other's areas don't they? ;-) also, fer doing that was definitely making a point.

[brontok]

Twisty bliss! Ha, I love that phrase! Although it does involve some level of mindfuck on my part when trying to plot things out.. *_*