AU Fic: Domina Cariño (9/?)

[brontok]

Domina Cariño (9/?)
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos
Rating: soft R (overall)
Word count: 853
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction.
Summary: This is a story about trust and control, in both love and lust.
Warning: Some parts (not all) may contain minor yet integral BDSM scenes/themes.

Comments

[baronessbadger]

YOU ARE SUCH A TEASE! I totally didn't keep your journal open in a tab all weekend and reload it an embarrassing number of times. Certainly not.

Muahahahaha. If Sergio hasn't already figured out that Niño is Fernando (I'm still not entirely sure he hasn't...) I think he may once he sees that bruise. Or the freckles. Or gives him a lick...

(I wonder if Niño's going to give him a bruise to match? Maybe something for him to hide when Fernando shows up again?)

I really love the beginning of this-the description of Sergio and insight into what he's feeling and thinking. The bit about how other failed relationships is especially telling. He's just never had what he needs to be secure in a relationship...
and the fact that he still feels that Fernando is holding all the power (even when it seems like he's the one submitting).

Gah. It's just all so perfect. <3

[brontok]

THANK YOU!!! <3
*psst, I tend to update anytime between Sunday late morning and Sunday early afternoon (EST)* no need for you to waste a perfectly good Saturday! :-D

[baronessbadger]

Oh, it definitely wasn't wasted, I'm getting a lot of writing done, myself. ;)

I can't wait for more!

[brontok]

Ooooohhh, you're writing! *excited*
Erm, also, I have a question. Or two. :-)))

[baronessbadger]

I have an answer coming! Or two. ;)