The Brain vs The Heart - A Battle Royale

[broncotvgirl]

Chapter 21

Reid used his anger to fuel his stride down to the hospital administrative department. He enjoyed yelling at the feeble minded guy behind the desk and berated him when it took more than two minutes to pull up the documents he demanded. Reid was equally unimpressed, not surprisingly, with Luke’s nephrologist’s credentials. He knew he would

Comments

[slayerkitty]

And you stopped it there? :D

Including the Chris is a douche who destroys his own health story line scares me - just tell me Reid doesn't die, okay?

[broncotvgirl]

love the icon! can't wait to revisit that verse :)

stopping there....Im just cruel like that *snickers wickedly*

Die? what???? I would never!!!!!!!! I'm still in complete denial as to what happened on the show (I mean they faked his death right??? That's totally what happened in my head) :)
No, I promise not Reid Olivers will be harmed in the making of this fic! I love him far to much to let that happen

[slayerkitty]

Hee, we'll start revisiting tonight! :D

You're a tease. :p

Oh thank goodness. In my head the whole thing never happened. NEVER HAPPENED. Denial is quite nice this time of year.

[broncotvgirl]

yay! bedtime reading after work :)

yep, I know! but, I will tell you when I completed my first NC-17 chapter - which will post VERY soon, I was so flush I needed a cold shower! yikes it's hard to write!

I love denial. It's my favorite place to visit :) I may even take up residence there just for LURE!!!

[stl29tide]

Oh god, please don't let the next chapter be brain and something happens to stop it. PLEASE!!!!!!

[broncotvgirl]

LOL you clearly know me far too well...... I don't want to give too much away, but..... they will get interrupted, at least momentarily. But it's still a heart chapter :)

[stl29tide]

Noooo!!!! Why God, why! Gah....I need sex, lol. I'm glad it's still heart though.

[broncotvgirl]

tee hee.... and you will get you sex and like it (hopefully)..... I promise! (even though it was rather horrifying to write for the first time)
First, they have a visitor....

[jem_018]

Chris! Do the world a favor and just die already. Please?
See, I'm being polite I said please. :D

Loved the lines from the show. ♥

Oh, you evil tease you. You stopped it there?! :D

great chapter. :)

[broncotvgirl]

LOL - well, since you asked SO nicely, I'll see what I can do....

yay! I've been waiting and waiting for the kidney conversation, the build up was killing me :)

A tease?? who me????

[murgy31]

This was awesome!! I can't believe you ended it there LOL!

[broncotvgirl]

yeah, that seems to be the concensus already :)
my mama taught me..... always leave 'em wanting more..... LOL

[sheleabow]

WOW! glad you wrote that to slayerkitty that you are not killing Reid. Please just go ahead and kill Chris off. Let him poison himself, fall off a cliff. fall under a train. ANYTHING! Please just get rid of him. Oh, and PLEASE!PLEASE! Let him take Noah with him.Great Chapter waiting..Just waiting here patiently...um...
impatiently for the next one....

[broncotvgirl]

I do have big plans for Chris, it is actually important he has been in this story since the beginning because of the role he plays for our boys! but, once I'm done with him.... *plots with evil twist of the hands*

LOL.... try to continue being patient.... I promise not to make you wait too much longer!