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[archived] [Neji & Sakura & Shikamaru] ; Breathless ; GNSR Request #5

Oct 26, 2006 17:36

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Naruto
: Hyuuga Neji x Haruno Sakura
: Nara Shikamaru x Haruno Sakura
Breathless

Requested By: infi_inficio
Request: Something occurs during a strategic mission & some ShikaSaku.
Comments: Smutty. My first really smut-like work. It's, uh, pretty bad. But everyone starts somewhere, right?

( It's smut. There's nothing elegant about it. )

mature content - naruto, - anime: naruto, naruto - pairing - neji/sakura/shikamaru

Comments 61

zelha October 27 2006, 01:23:42 UTC

Tee hee. <3
NejiSakuShika is like the tensai threesome. Kinky!!
I loved it!!!! *grins like a maniac*

incandescence October 27 2006, 01:34:44 UTC

The word I was thinking was perverted. Obviously I am a pervert. OMG. *dies*

zelha October 27 2006, 01:36:00 UTC

Don't worry, being a pervert is fun!!! ;D

incandescence October 27 2006, 01:47:05 UTC

Haha. XD

I can only hope that I can now write YOUR request without completely dying.

Gah.

Thread 7

kerrie13 October 27 2006, 02:12:42 UTC

zomg you are my freaken hero <3333333333

So hot *drool* If you are a pervert then so am I lol cause many this was teh awesome. It's going in my memories..

Threesome action = mmmm

ShikaSakuNeji threesome action = *dies*

Have I mentioned just how much I love this threesome?

Once again, my hero!

incandescence October 27 2006, 02:20:15 UTC

Yay, I'm a hero. :D Do I get like, gold and armors as my reward? A level up or three? *flex, flex*

Let's all be perverts together. Yay, pervertdom! Long live us pervs! :D

uchuunoyanushi October 27 2006, 02:52:45 UTC

*fans self* Wow. Just wow.

I loved Sakura's reactions.

And ShikaSakuNeji is my new OT3.

And wow.

incandescence October 27 2006, 02:59:44 UTC

LOL! ♥ I don't mind ShikaSaku, but it's not a favorite of mine. I just wrote it for the request. :o I'm glad you liked it, though :D

uchuunoyanushi October 27 2006, 03:19:46 UTC

deleria on FFN is writing the greatest ShikaSaku fic, Dawning, which totally converted me. ShikaSaku isn't my favorite, but it at least makes more sense than ShikaIno since I can't ever see them ever hooking up. Well, no, I can see them hooking up, but there's no way it would end well.

But yes, I totally envy your ability to write threesomes. I can't do it. The mechanics confuse me, and I always end up going "too many limbs!!" just before my head explodes. =P

incandescence October 27 2006, 03:29:08 UTC

Deleria is an awesome writer. I didn't realize she wrote Naruto!fic, though. :o I'll have to check it out.

Hee. ShikaIno is one of my favorites, actually. *is shot.*

As for threesomes, this is a first. And er, it was confusing. Why else are they in a position where they cant really move much? *grin*

Thread 9

yueni October 27 2006, 03:02:54 UTC

Holycraphot! New ot3 omg.

incandescence October 27 2006, 03:10:11 UTC

LOL. :D Glad you like.

infi_inficio October 27 2006, 03:12:05 UTC

*faints*

ShikaSakuNeji oh hell yes!

... I would be blushing throughout the whole day if I wrote that in class. D:

Thank you for writing another one of my favourite OT3 (the other being NaruSakuSasu XD)!

incandescence October 27 2006, 03:19:11 UTC

Hee, yay. :D Glad you liked it, considering it was for you ;_;

Seriously, I can't believe I did that. LOL.