[Itachi & Sasuke] ; No, Really?

[incandescence]

Naruto
: Uchiha Itachi + Uchiha Sasuke
No, Really?

Comments: Writing this as riza sleepses. I'mma go molester her after this, oh yes. Or I'll just sleep so I can pack up to go home in the morning, hah. Sheer crack with an odd smattering of angst to frost it.

Comments

[flagellantket]

Woah. This fic shifts gears very suddenly from fluffy to dark. Not that it's a bad thing. I think the suddenness works very well for this story--it's just like waking up from a dream, like Sasuke does.

I'm sort of babbling because I'm tired, so forgive me. I really liked this fic, how Sasuke is such a cute little snot, and how he's so screwed up when he wakes up.

[incandescence]

Sasuke was so cute as a kid... then he woke up from his memories and became so twisted. Woe, says I. xD Glad you liked it.

[maxxim_huzzah]

Calculators, after all, don't have any abc's. Not unless you turn it upside down to write hello. That was the coolest thing in the world, doncha know! Before we had Gameboys and PSPs and Nintendo DSes... *lols*

It went from cute to creepy in a second. it still smells of fresh blood though it has long since dried and caked. It's been years, yet it is fresh and full and wonderful to his nose, and he is content. and the implications of this line make it VERY SINISTER. I would have loved to see the rest of the fluff, or the rest of the evil, but I'll do with this. ♥

[incandescence]

I know! I used to have so much fun doing that to my calculator... who the fuck wanted to use it for REAL work, right? XD And when I got the uber calculator of doom for Calculus, I was writing notes all day long, 'cause it DID have its ABCs. Aha. xD

Bwahahaha. There is no such thing as the rest of the fluff or the rest of the angst, 'cause my muse went kapoot. I wrote it in like five minutes while Riza was le sleeping. xD

[riza]

EHEHEHE~!

LOVE YOU, BAY-BEE! *snuggles*

But, no, really. This wins way hard. I had to keep myself from laughing at the beginning since you're sleeping right now. :D

And the end is: T_T

[incandescence]

I LOVE YOU TOO OMG! XD You totally coulda laughed and woked me up, I woulda come out to glomples you and molester you. Kinky computer sex, baby. *snickers*

I love you the lots, wut wut.

[joyinthedance]

Wow that was intense. The beginning was maybe the cutest thing I've read in a long time (Sasuke comparing everything to the suffed dog!) but then it go so...DARK. And if there's one thing I love even more than cute, it's dark. Nice!

[incandescence]

I know, it was a total abrupt change from ze cute and fuzzeh! to... ze dark and gloomeh D: D:

But whatevs, it works. 'Cause I say so. 'Cause I can. OH YES I CAN. D: D: *clings to her meager rights as a dorky fangirl - yanno, the ones that don't really exist.* XD

... forgive me, I'm totally high on just-waking-up and the depression of parting from my Riza. D:

[youngsasuke]

Wow. Such an abrupt shift from happy to dark really has an impact. This is the kind of story that keeps you thinking long after you finish it. Great job. *added to mem's*

[incandescence]

:D Thank you! Glad you enjoyed.