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May 29, 2011 15:54

title: with voices clear
pairing: leo messi/ibrahim afellay
words: ~9400
rating: r
summary: In December, Ibrahim transfers to Barcelona.

( maybe love won't let you down )

barcelona, pairing: leo messi/ibrahim afellay, fic

Comments 26

meretricula May 29 2011, 23:55:39 UTC

goddammit woman I am trying to write a dissertation and you go posting this absolute beauty so I have to stop everything and read it? how inconsiderate. I mean, really.

ughhhh Ibi I can't I can't I can't he is so wonderful and Leo <3333 and Masche and even the glancing touch of Abi congratulations you have made me weep I hope you're happy.

but seriously. dissertation.

brojan June 2 2011, 01:17:03 UTC

hahaha i regret nothingggggg

no really, thanks for taking the time to read and comment when you're so busy! and good luck finishing up

mardia May 30 2011, 00:34:19 UTC

Ooooh, I love this. I adore Ibi, and there's so little fic about him, so to get something like this, that's so awesome, is really fantastic. I also love that in that first moment, that first kiss, it actually comes across that Afellay does have two years on Leo. It's a small thing, but it's really nice to see.

brojan June 2 2011, 01:18:46 UTC

thank you so much! and seriously, where is the ibi fic? he seems so awesome, i need more of him tbqh

distira May 30 2011, 01:04:14 UTC

i hate barcelona but you made me love this. i think that's the highest praise i can give you.

luxover May 30 2011, 16:06:13 UTC

what if luis suarez went to barcelona? what then? I DEFY YOU TO SAY YOU HATE BARCELONA THEN

distira May 30 2011, 16:08:53 UTC

sry2say that my hate has been instilled in me since birth and would probably trump my luis love
i'd stlil love luis though! fear not!

luxover May 30 2011, 16:15:48 UTC

that's a good answer. i'd probably disown you if you were like, switching alliances or something.

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arsenal4ever May 30 2011, 09:57:46 UTC

Oh wow.
Okay I usually don't read Leo fics cus I just struggle to see him in that way (that's just me, nada wrong with him haha!), but for some reason I was drawn to this. And boy am I glad I read it. It's beautiful. It flows so well, and yet it's simple and understated. The characterisations are gorgeous and it's just a wonderful, lovely fic all round :)

brojan June 2 2011, 01:22:27 UTC

thank you! leo is amazeballs, get into it. (just kidding, i understand! thanks for giving it a chance <3)

climbingeverest May 30 2011, 15:07:32 UTC

oh my. every time i think i don't want to read fic anymore, you post something and i just get out my popcorn and sit down and fall in love all over again. beautiful.

brojan June 2 2011, 01:23:40 UTC

wow that's really nice, thank you so much!

also your icon is mesmerizing