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May 08, 2011 23:44

title: caught
pairing: leo messi/david villa
words: ~4500
rating: r
summary: footballkink2 prompt: messi/villa. rumors start up when they're photographed, you know, like the whole ibra/pique debacle... here

( you were the blue of the sky you came after the storm )

pairing: leo messi/david villa, fic

Comments 36

weekendoffender May 9 2011, 05:25:24 UTC

So so so so good! Loved it =)

brojan May 9 2011, 23:59:52 UTC

thank you so much :D

wh_mermaid May 9 2011, 05:32:21 UTC

In front of them, Dani turns around, sticks his face between the seats. “Lovers’ quarrel?” he asks with a wide grin.
I died laughing because I can honestly see him asking/doing that. Mwuahahahaha Dani is such a lovely troll kekekeke

This fic is lovely. I love the prompt and you ran with it and made it work brilliantly. <3

brojan May 10 2011, 00:00:56 UTC

thank you! dani is a life inspiration to be honest.

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brojan May 10 2011, 00:01:59 UTC

hahaha you know i agree with you! thanks for reading and commenting <3

meretricula May 9 2011, 08:24:53 UTC

this is so effing brilliant, I can't even. they broke the bed! Victor banging on the wall to make them shut up! and Gaby and Dani and Pique and Bojan and Pep, omg. and Leo being all paranoid "he doesn't want to see me" and (if I'm reading this right?) Villa really did have the flu, haha. but nothing can top the instigating incident. sauce on Leo's face. he so would. <333

hey youuuuuu are you one of the people I was talking to about Messi gangbang because if so why do we never have these conversations non-anon. my life needs more of such discussions in it.

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meretricula May 9 2011, 12:38:42 UTC

OF COURSE IT WAS YOU <333 obvs I would prefer to be having that discussion non-anon but I'm softening to the kinkmeme if I get to have epic discussions about variants on Messi gangbang there, haha. (but who am I having it with I must knowwwwww! me and anonymity are not simpatico, lol self.) definitely the response to that prompt has brightened my morning. and now I'm going to go make icons, and I will know my people by the EASY #10 beside their names~~~

do you like my evil plot btw :D

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elizaberglund May 9 2011, 08:52:45 UTC

oh1 wonderfull! I love it! It's such a crack! Poor Leo, not only that but everybody was after him and Villa was angry. I love the broken bed and the kiss and the end ... briliant!

brojan May 10 2011, 00:02:33 UTC

thank you for reading and commenting! <3