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[brojan]

title: how to say goodbye in three different languages
pairing: david silva/david villa
rating: r
words: ~1300
this is cheesier and slightly more depressing than intended, but it is my celebration for turning in my thesis so whatever. i do what i want.

Comments

[luxover]

this was adorable and marvelous and everything it needed to be and yet i literally cannot.

hello, heart, let me scoop your broken pieces up off of the ground.

[distira]

oh oh oh this is so achy and domestic and beautiful and it was exactly what i needed to read today. ♥

[influira]

jesus fucking christ, this is absolutely perfect in about a million ways. just - god. i don't even have words to say about it omfg hahadfslkhaha i'm like. HOLY CRAP. this is making my chest hurt and now i'm all achy and, fuck. this is beautiful. just, simply gorgeous.

[una_surrealista]

this was beautiful. I love so many parts that I could quote about a million of them, but my favorite favorite favorite line is the one about how they go around putting post-it notes on everything, pretending that it isn't going to be packed up soon. I feel like that's so sweet and sad and just, it's what this fic is, perfectly. this was really wonderful.

and congratulations on your thesis!!!!!

[katie_andrea]

wow..how they just savour the moment coz it's the best days of their lives as their separation looms is bittersweet =(

i like that they're just fooling around and all giggly and stuff and not thinking about what's gonna happen next coz it's a positive sign

the last two paragraphs are just hard - really depressing.. when the translator yielded "Everyday i will miss you" is a reminder that there's, sad to say, nothing they can do about the separation..and that the dreaded "goodbye" is ruthlessly inevitable