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Feb 23, 2011 18:45

title: retiro
pairing: leo messi/david villa
rating: pg
words: 1430
summary: footballkink prompt: Leo Messi / Whoever, established relationship, post-retirement from football.

( my life has been extraordinary, blessed and cursed and won )

pairing: leo messi/david villa, fic

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luxover February 23 2011, 23:47:27 UTC

HA HA THIS WAS MY PROMPT, SUCKAAAA, YOU CAN'T TAKE IT BACK NOW.

BRB READING

brojan February 23 2011, 23:51:32 UTC

OH SNAP

this comment made me nervous hahahah

luxover February 24 2011, 00:14:03 UTC

I. AM. DYING.

BOOM, DEAD.

I READ THIS ENTIRE THING WITH A HUUUUGE SMILE ON MY FACE AND I'M STILL SMILING AND THIS IS EXACTLY 110% WHAT I WANTED ONLY IT'S MORE.

OK. ALRIGHT. FROM THE TOP.

Sometimes Leo wakes up in the morning confused by the quiet.

Right from the beginning I love this because I feel like it's so dead on, the fact that when they're playing, they have so much to do and everyone wants a photo or an autograph or a soundbite or another goal, and then when they stop playing, most everything else stops with it, and they're not entirely prepared for it. And that's exactly what I imagine their retirement to be like-- different, unsettling, but not bad. Just new.

but he hadn’t been able to keep up at Barcelona anymore, hadn’t been able to offer them what they needed and he wasn’t ready to stop, at that time didn’t think there would ever be a day he would be ready to stop [...] He’d gotten to play until he didn’t want to anymore [...] THIS IS LEO MESSI IN MY HEART. THIS IS HIM. I really feel like playing is something he ( ( ... )

brojan February 24 2011, 00:53:19 UTC

WELL I SMILED THE WHOLE TIME I WAS READING THIS COMMENT SO WE ARE EVEN

seriously, i pretty much live for leo/villa. in my fanfic life i mean. like, no one else even came to mind when i saw "leo/whoever." (the same isn't true for villa but whatever he's a special snowflake)

it almost hurt to write about leo playing somewhere else, but i think he will. i don't want to see him on a bench pouting any more than i do now. BUT HE WILL ALWAYS COME BACK TO US

I;M GLAD YOU LIKED IT THAT WAS NERVE-WRACKING, thanks for the lovely comment ok bye

luxover February 24 2011, 01:23:25 UTC

seriously, like. i don't have a "favorite fics" list or anything, but if i did, this would be in it.

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