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broedym

Fic: Waiting for that Day - pt. 2 [Eli Stone]

Jun 04, 2008 19:50

( 'Wait, it happened again, didn't it?' Chen felt a bubble of excitement when Eli just looked at him, defeated. 'I knew it! I told you!' )

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Comments 6

nobleplatypus June 4 2008, 11:34:49 UTC

I hope Eli eventually tells Chen what the visions are about, because I'd love to see Chen's reaction to hearing that they all involve Eli being married to his currently-engaged-to-someone-else coworker. More work to be done, indeed. XD

You have their voices down perfectly. This was a great start to the day!

broedym June 4 2008, 11:58:03 UTC

Thank you kindly! That very conversation will be coming up soon. :-)

teskafuture June 5 2008, 01:36:24 UTC

Oh, poor Eli! Love Frank's 'I told you so's. *hehe* Looking forward to part 3!

broedym June 5 2008, 08:34:33 UTC

Excellent! Glad you're enjoying it.

allisonhouse June 5 2008, 09:25:17 UTC

Totally loving this!
I can see it happening on the show!

broedym June 5 2008, 09:41:13 UTC

Thank you for saying so! Glad you're enjoying it.