FIC: "Submission" 1/1 Billy Boyd/Karl Urban (Dominic Monaghan/Elijah Wood) NC-17

[broadwriting]

Title: "Submission" 1/1
Author: Brenda (azewewish)
Pairing: Billy Boyd/Karl Urban (Dominic Monaghan/Elijah Wood)
Rating: NC-17
Summary: The best things in life are worth the wait.
Disclaimer: Never happened.
Notes: Written for the 2004 Remix challenge. Original fic was "Bind" by Jen. Warning for BDSM themes

Comments

[astarte99]

*surfing in from friend's friends*

Nice! Great grasp of domination and the dynamics of being a top.

Thanks so much for sharing.

[azewewish]

Thank you! I tried to make it as realistic as possible. <33

[darknightjess]

Very very good.
Yummmmmm!

[azewewish]

Thank you!!!!!

[gabrielrose]

nngh.

Yep, that's about all my dirty little mind can come up with as feedback right now.

[azewewish]

*giggles*

Thank you!!!

[ex_neveragai355]

I thought you'd written that!!! XDD
I loved it. I knew when I'd read that first line, "It wasn't like Karl'd set out to become a top", that I'd love it. ;D
Great job, Brenda!

[azewewish]

Thank you!!!

Yeah, I kinda gave myself away from the get-go.

[airgiodslv]

Brenda, my love, my only one...this is a meager offering, compared to what you have given me, but I still want to let you know how strongly this story impacted me, and how much I adore it. And you. <3

I love the way you open it, because it so perfectly echoes Bind, only with a twist coming from the other side, already knowing and having experience. It ties the two together, something that I am abysmal at and love about others writing together. It gives the story a connection, a through-line