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funkyshaz57 December 30 2011, 21:26:43 UTC
Another really great chapter. Heavy and intense and terribly sad and dis-heartening though. The Flashback I loved until the Miscarriage obviously, it was clear how much they loved one another and it's so sad to know they've lost all that.

It's sadder to think and I'm assuming that if Arizona makes it back and the baby is fine that although Callie is hurting she probably will hate Arizona and not forgive her...I'm assuming your going to go down that road, it's not like you'll give us happy when we want it lol! So I know I'm thinking ahead but if Callie is angry and tells Arizona to go stuff herself I wonder why she's around at Teddy's wanting information.

Teddy intrigues me I like how she's got Arizona's back in a way. I really hope she will be a support to Arizona when she returns

Callie is broken yes...it's obvious because of the way you write her thoughts and feelings but her actions, the sleeping around with anything that moves is so not cool, one would think after all she's been through she might grow up and deal with her issue without laying on her back. She might be broken but I wonder if either of them have stopped to think that Arizona left for a reason, while we don't have all the information I'm guessing Arizona was hurt too, everyone always assumes that all their break up's were Arizona's fault and she never hurt all because Callie is obvious about her hurt, its kind of annoying

Anyway still liking this a lot although I'm finding it hard to swallow all the angst!

Keep up the good work!

And I think it's a day early but Happy New Years!!!!

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brittlovesher December 30 2011, 23:07:19 UTC
Ahhh. Your comments make me happy. I seriously look forward to them every chapter! :)

The miscarriage definitely sucked, and it was a complete bummer to write. But it has to feel a little good to know that you called that right! They really did love each other back then and they still do, there's just so much unknown for the two of them yet.

Haha- there will be happy. I solemnly swear to you, there will be happy. They just have to go through the storm to fully understand and appreciate the rainbow on the other side. Things may not exactly work out the way Callie wants them too, however.

I love Teddy. I love her friendship with Arizona. Next chapter really reveals a lot about her character and her relationship to Arizona, so stay tuned for that!

Callie is... such a complex character. Who I hate and love at the same time. Every time she gets hurt, she kinda reverts back to the same person who just sleeps around to forget her feelings. She knows why Arizona left, and you will find that out soon too and I think that really weighs heavily on her conscious to know that she was a part of her leaving. But she thinks that Arizona bailed and is totally fine, which, we know is not the case.

I am so glad that you are still liking this! I promise it will get better, it just kinda has to get worse first.

Happy New Years! :)

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