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Fic: The Frightened Inch Between Our Skins

Mar 09, 2009 01:51

Title: The Frightened Inch Between Our Skins
Author: Britomart_is
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Sam/Dean, Sam/OFC, Sam/OMC
Words: 5720
Notes: Follows The Air Moves In To Fill the Spaces Where My Body’s Been. Read that first.
Thanks to clex-monkie89 for being my second set of eyes and to girlmostlikely for her porn-enabling and general awesomeness.

Summary: So, now that Dean knows what Sam’ ( Read more... )

my fic

Comments 263

winterweathered March 9 2009, 07:02:16 UTC

OH MY GOD I AM THE WORST EVER BECAUSE I NEVER EMAILED YOU ABOUT HOW AMAZING THIS IS.

I am seriously SO SORRY. I totally spaced!

Anyway, I am soooooo glad you wrote this story. The first was absolutely amazing all on its own, and such an original idea, but this was absolutely the icing on the cake. I usually don't like threesomes in fic, but it worked SO well here. And Dean jerking off over Sam but not touching him - GUH. We all know how pretty Sam's back is. Hahaha.

Seriously, SO SORRY about not giving you timely feedback! You're amazing and this is totally hot. And I love how it ends a little shmoopy, because it's all so rooted in sex before that, and that surprising flip to tenderness and genuine affection is what really seals the deal.

britomart_is March 9 2009, 07:11:18 UTC

Don't worry about it! You've been all with the death plague and airplanes and such, things get lost in the flurry! YOU ARE STILL THE BEST EVER.

There should be odes written to Sam's back. Actually, Dean wrote one when he was twenty.

Glad the schmoop didn't seem out of place! Struck me as the logical conclusion - they could have all the sex in the world, but until they got a little hearts-in-eyes sappy, would never have what they really wanted.
ANYWAY. YAY.

quarterwhore March 9 2009, 07:10:25 UTC

Goddamn, woman. Beautiful.

britomart_is March 9 2009, 07:15:43 UTC

♥♥♥

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britomart_is March 9 2009, 13:54:43 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you found this a worthy successor to the first. :)

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britomart_is March 9 2009, 13:56:23 UTC

*GLOMP* O HAI NICE ICON.

You are the bestest enabler ever. And see, I can write schmoop! I can! Pre-S4 ficathon, WILL HAPPEN. Uh, someday.

*spins you in circles*

veronamay March 9 2009, 10:17:56 UTC

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... I got nothing. Holy fucking shit, it's like you reached into my head and served up my favourite kink on a silver platter. Slow-roasted UST with a side order of schmoop, Jesus.

britomart_is March 9 2009, 13:57:59 UTC

it's like you reached into my head and served up my favourite kink on a silver platter
Well, I'm psychic, y'know.

I'm a big fan of slooooowly developing UST, so I'm glad you are, too! Wouldn't want it to feel too drawn out. And yeaaaaah, schmoop ... I just like the boys all in love.

♥