Love That's Gonna Break Me In Two - (Sam/Dean, NC-17)

[britomart_is]

Comments

[albydarned]

Oh holy shit, that was amazing. Seriously, the sex was hot and fantastic, but what really won me over was how Sam managed to get himself off. I've never seen that in a fic before, and it's truly something of awesomeness! Thanks for posting this! *adds to mems*

[britomart_is]

Thank you! Heh, I had fun with Sam getting himself off, that was one of the first things I knew I wanted to include in the fic.
Anyway, I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and am flattered that you're mem-ing it. This is my first fic of any kind, so the awesome feedback is *very* appreciated. Thanks for reading and commenting.

[flinchflower]

It's about my tongue. And my inability to reel it back into my mouth. Wow. Sexy. Especially the Dean's cock is still hard and Sam gets off on it whilst he's sleeping.... and the single kiss on the ass... Wow.

[britomart_is]

Hee. The boys inspire such dirtiness in me. So this is my attempt to share my filthy, porny, sometimes schmoopy thoughts. I'm so glad you enjoyed it - thanks for the comment. *beams*

[flinchflower]

THey DO inspire dirtiness, I find that myself. I wonder what it is about them? I mean, _I_ had never porned before writing the wincest...

[britomart_is]

That is truly impressive, considering how prolific you have become in porning ... obviously, it's Sam and Dean's fault. They made us kinky.

[lamiael]

I think I lost karma points just reading this, it was so dirty. I love this fandom!

[britomart_is]

I think I lost karma points just reading this, it was so dirty.
*cracks up*
I think that is the best compliment I can possibly imagine! So thank you. *grins*

I love this fandom too. I love that I can write something like this and that people enjoy it, and I *love* that people are so sweet and enthusiastic and welcoming to new writers. Y'all are awesome, that's what makes me want to write fic ...

[slytherinblack]

This? This was awesome. I think I love it a lot. It was funny but still hot and the interaction was perfect.

[britomart_is]

Thank you very much! I'm glad the humor + sex + brotherly interaction all worked for you. Thanks for reading and commenting, it's awesome to hear people's responses.

[nerthus]

I loved this because it wasn't PERFECT sex like I read over and over in fanfics (which, don't get me wrong, I love those, too, ha! I'm just saying...) Sex isn't always like some perfectly choreographed dance, both partners don't always 'finish' together or even get to finish at all sometimes, ha, and sometimes body parts don't fit together just right or some position that SOUNDED fun or interesting turns out to be NOT such a great idea, ha...and in this fic I loved how Dean just fell asleep, ha (God, if I had a dime for the times my 'ex did that to me after coming home after an evening of drinking with his buds, just leaving me hanging and snoring away all happy with himself while I was VERY frustrated). And even as I was wincing about it, I liked that Sam WAS sore and Dean was SICK/HUNGOVER and reality hit them in the face after their night of delicious debauchery. Oddly enough it endears them to me in my wincesty heart all the more, ha. And the sex WAS hot, imperfect or not.

[britomart_is]

I looooove imperfect!sex ... there's so much delicious porn in fandom, but imperfect!sex is still pretty rare, which is part of what inspired me to write some myself. Cause everyone experiences random awkward or funny or just plain bad sex, you know? It's just part of life. And I'm sure Sam and Dean in particular wouldn't have perfectly choreographed sex all the time. I'm delighted that it worked for you! Thank you very much for reading and commenting; this is the first fic I've ever written, so the warm reception is very, very much appreciated.