Fic: Absence

[britomart_is]

Title: Absence
Author: britomart_is
Genre: Gen
Rating: R
Words: 2000
Notes: Written for the horror comment meme, for a prompt by pkwench: One of the boys is losing a sense at a time.

Comments

[gottalovev]

jeez, that is... well it's creepy as hell, so job well done! you have such a way with words, I am amazed. I could feel it all go away, along with Sam for the horrifying ride and the end is chilling.

[britomart_is]

Thank you kindly! You have no idea how thrilled I am about the entire horror meme, it is so freakin fun.

[gigglingkat]

Reaction 1: asud[uf'ewf oidju';vhja/'ej'

Reaction 2: HOLY SHIT THAT WAS CREEPY.

AWESOME AND FANTASTIC. BUT CREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPY.

Reaction 3: wherein actually comments lie - still pending. I'm stuck in a loop between 1 and 2.

[britomart_is]

:D :D :D
Works for me!

[ruthless1]

That made all the hairs on my arms stand straight up. And I actually said "Oh Jesus" to my cat. Very well down. Now I might not sleep well tonight. *shudders a little bit*

[britomart_is]

And I actually said "Oh Jesus" to my cat.
Eeeeexcellent.

[elusive_life_77]

That was really creepy but the ending hit me like a baseball bat.

Nice job!

[britomart_is]

That's what I aim for! :D Thank you!

[clex_monkie89]

GOD, this is SO DAMN CREEPY in the best way possible.

[britomart_is]

I do my best. :D