Slowly, But Exceeding Fine; Chapter Four

[lemon_bar]

Title: Slowly, But Exceeding Fine
Author: lemon_bar
Rating: R
Summary: Sequel to 'A Thousand Beautiful Things'. Brian Kinney lives in the highest loft on Tremont Street. He has imported Italian fixtures, designer clothes and neon blue lights above his bed. He has also gone to bed every night for the past three weeks holding a teddy bear with movie-star

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[_alicesprings]

Dun da dun dun dah!!

[oh_amelia]

David looked a bit constipated, but he shook Emmett’s hand just the same.

LMAO. I was never a fan of David. (In the show I always thought that he treated Michael like a child rather than a partner.) Can't believe that Ben and David are a couple.

So, is Justin gonna get sprung from Liberty soon? :) Can't wait for more. And so happy that you posted TWO chapeters tonight.

[lemon_bar]

Hee hee. I know. I'm not a fan of David at all. I have evil plans for him in this fic ... in fact, in all three fics I have in the works ... hm. That's actually something I hadn't noticed before. Gee, he bugged me more than I realized. LOL.

As to your other question: sooner than you think!

[rae_1985]

Sooner than we think!? YAYAYAYAYAY! He's moving in with Brian right? And they're going to live happily ever after? And Emmett will plan their wedding...

:D

This fic is so refreshing. I love seeing updates.

[randysgirl_645]

Oh wow two updates in one day I could get used to this :D great update!

[kitkatbyte]

Poor Brian. He has so much to deal with right now! I am amused at how much your dislike Dr. David. Haha! And Ben needs to meet Michael, so they can get together, if that's at all possible. Although, Michael will probably never leave Liberty so who knows how that would work out.

I'm glad that Justin is painting a mural! It's his first paid job as an artist. Hopefully all the encouragement in this area will make him more willing to entertain the idea of becoming an artist in the outside world.

Anyway, I was refreshing britin_manor all day and suddenly not only chapter 3 was up, but chapter 4 as well!! You posted them one right after the other! That is pretty quick. It always makes me happy to get more than I expect :)

[lemon_bar]

I write every morning (so far, but near the end of August I'll have a schedule change with school and I'll probably be posting less) but anyway, I usually finish a chapter or two in the morning and then have to wait till the evenign to post, unless I have a chance in the day. That's why two so close. Because I finished both this morning.

I really don't like David. I didn't realize how much until someone commented saying they didn't like him either, and then I realized that in each of the three fics currently posted that I'm working on, David is evil or an ass. All three! *shakes head*

As to your other comments, *grins* can I ask that you trust me and I'll work it out? hee hee, I don't want to give it all away!! I'm so glad you're enjoying!!

[kitkatbyte]

I'm surpried you include David at all, if you hate him so much! I tend to just ignore that he was ever on the show. Well, mostly because I found him to be either extremely boring or annoying.

And don't think my other comments are me prodding you for information... I am just expressing hopes and concerns based on the chapter. It seems to be the main way I react to this fic. All I can think is, "oh no, what will happen because of this?". I don't expect to be even remotely right, and I don't expect you to confirm or deny anything at all. I am just trying to express what I got out of the fic.

[lemon_bar]

I include David because he's still interesting. Or rather, he creates an interesting dynamic, and offers possibilities. I don't think of it as being completely anti-David, like how some people are anti-Michael. The same way you follow a thread from one character that begins at some (even a very small) root, to suddenly have, say, Brian being romantic or something, I do that with David in the other. Maybe I'm in denial, that could be true as well. I have an excuse for 'All the Rage', as least. I mean, the plot he offered was too funny to pass-up. He's not entirely evil, I hope I don't ever depict him as flat and serving only a one-dimensional purpose (let me know if I do, because I'll change it

[princesskirsty]

and the plot thickens......u did good babe!! two chapters in one night, you're trying to kill me and i love it! :D

kirsty
xx

[lemon_bar]

Death by B/J sounds pretty good to me!!

[princesskirsty]

it sure does!! LMAO