My internet friends are the best.
me: Ky, my characters are running rampant in my story, halp
Kyrilean: "The clear blue sky suddenly began to darken as dark rolling clouds moved in."
"Lightning lit up the sky as the thunder rolled like massive freight trains through the sky."
me: okay mister metaphor
Kyrilean: "In a sudden flash, a lightning bolt slammed into the ground in front of Amber's characters!"
"As the light dissapated(? shit!) a being of immense power stood before them!"
"It was Kyrilean, God of the Skies, Overlord of All!"
me: ...
Kyrilean: "In a thundering voice he boomed, 'Knock that shit off! Your running rampant is giving Amber fits!!!"
and to think you didn't even have to pay for that!
Kyrilean: "The clear blue sky suddenly began to darken as dark rolling clouds moved in."
"Lightning lit up the sky as the thunder rolled like massive freight trains through the sky."
me: okay mister metaphor
Kyrilean: "In a sudden flash, a lightning bolt slammed into the ground in front of Amber's characters!"
"As the light dissapated(? shit!) a being of immense power stood before them!"
"It was Kyrilean, God of the Skies, Overlord of All!"
me: ...
Kyrilean: "In a thundering voice he boomed, 'Knock that shit off! Your running rampant is giving Amber fits!!!"
and to think you didn't even have to pay for that!